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Name: Hermione_Rocks (Signed) · Date: 02/12/05 12:19 · For: Awaiting
That's okay if it's short, it's still great!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! And I'm really glad you're not mad it's short...:D

Name: i_luv_padfoot (Signed) · Date: 02/12/05 11:03 · For: Awaiting
i don't think anyone would mind it being a bit short coz its still a funny concept and it has still been a great stroy.*waits staring at screen for update*

Author's Response: LOL...whoopsy, a second post!

Name: i_luv_padfoot (Signed) · Date: 02/12/05 11:03 · For: Awaiting
i don't think anyone would mind it being a bit short coz its still a funny concept and it has still been a great stroy.*waits staring at screen for update*

Author's Response: I'm really really glad you don't think people would mind much...I was scared everyone would hate me! Thanks for the review!!

Name: Kristin (Signed) · Date: 02/12/05 10:40 · For: Awaiting
Still superb!! :D I love this fic... Bit disappointing that it will be so short though. But on the other hand, better to stop while it's still great. I'm really looking forward to see how it all ends! And, I have a small question: how many people at/outside Hogwarts knows about Tom/Albus being teenagers? It seemed to be a lot of them... Just a bit confused. (And, also, I don't think Hermione is totally wrong in describing Tom as "...cute")

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I hope you like the ending. Umm...let's see...the whole Order knows, along with Ron and Hermione, and the Hogwarts staff (which mostly includes the Order) and that's it. The Death Eaters don't know that they are younger, they just think Voldie's just been gone a while. (Kinda stupid, aren't they?) LOL, so you're rooting for Hermione?? hehe..:D

Name: Elladora Riddle (Signed) · Date: 02/12/05 2:19 · For: Hogwarts
I LOVE your story! Please write more soon! It had me lmao!

Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad it did!!! Thank you!!

Name: AlexisTaylor (Anonymous) · Date: 02/11/05 20:03 · For: Attack
"and horribly resembled Harry slightly" was a very awkward phrase. Be careful of your grammar. That said, your story's rather fun. I haven't read this idea before, and I find it refreshing. There is one thing you'll want to watch. At times, you make them sound more like 6 year olds than sixteen year olds (like when Voldemort throws a tantrum). I know it adds humor value, but I thought I'd let you know anyway

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I agree that it was an awkward phrase, "horribly" and "slightly" put so close together made it sound weird...it doesn't work with the tongue right...for some reason I guess I just let it slide. (my mistake..) LOL, I wanted Tom to be immature, in my head that's what he came across to me as. I can understand your view, though. I assumed that at some point sixteen year olds can be childish (I'm five months away from being sixteen myself, so no offense to any 16 yr olds reading this...lol) and I had never realized I was making it unrealistic. :D Thanks again for the pointers!

Name: meva (Signed) · Date: 02/11/05 14:39 · For: Hogwarts
i luved it especially the last para

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I hope I can submit chapter seven today...

Name: Lizzygirl (Signed) · Date: 02/08/05 16:11 · For: Hogwarts
That was great! I really liked it that you sent them to Hogwarts and I loved the way you had Tom barge into the Great Hall. Stupid as usual that Tom. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm really glad you like it! Yep, he's stupid as usual...lol...he always thinks rules are below him...hehe :D

Name: Scheherazade (Signed) · Date: 02/07/05 23:15 · For: Hogwarts
OMG ! Tom is SO going to have indigestion ! The "boy formally known as Voldemort" is going to weigh a 1000 pounds, lol I can't WAIT to read more !!!! Please update soon !!!!

Author's Response: LOL, it would have been really funny if I showed him gaining a zillion pounds, wouldn't it?? LOL...thank you for reviewing!!! I'm hoping to get seven up as soon as possible :D

Name: ms_potco (Signed) · Date: 02/06/05 16:29 · For: Hogwarts
that stupid prat tom! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I agree! Tom can be such a huge prat sometimes...thanks for the review!!!!!

Name: Kristin (Signed) · Date: 02/06/05 12:20 · For: Hogwarts
This is still the best fanfic I've ever read... partly because it's so brilliantly written, partly because there are no canon mistakes and the characters are not OOC, and partly because the plot is amazing. Don't think this is how HBP will turn out, though, but anyway :-) How long will this fic be when it's finished?

Author's Response: Wow....thank you so very much!!! That makes me really glad to hear that...you're so nice! LOL. I agree, I don't think HBP will turn out this way either...:D It's gonna be eight chapters, (kinda short...I know)but there's a deleted scene on that chapter that I hope everyone will like...thanks for reviewing!

Name: Catana Snape (Signed) · Date: 02/06/05 9:33 · For: Hogwarts

Author's Response: ROFL!! That would be so funny if he was permanently glued to the chair because he couldn't move...hehe...yes, he is totally obsessed with food...he won't stop eating...:D

Name: Tap (Signed) · Date: 02/06/05 0:14 · For: Hogwarts
Tom is such an idiot...lol! Poor Ginny! What a scare for her, and I loved the food bit with Tom! Very funny! Keep it up!:D

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Tom is quite the idiot..(and a pig, lol)..

Name: KarenWeasley (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 20:38 · For: Dursleys

Author's Response: LOL Thanks a bunch!!! I'm happy you like it!!!!

Name: HPF (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 16:56 · For: Hogwarts

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!! :D :D

Name: MereRanger (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 16:54 · For: Hogwarts
Thank you for sending them to Hogwarts! I've looked forward to this chapter and this has brightened my day!

Author's Response: You're welcome...lol..thank you for reviewing! I'm glad it made you happy :D

Name: Auror316 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 16:30 · For: Hogwarts
good chapter, I love how you made tom such a pig in this, he never stops eating,lol. update soon.

Author's Response: LOL I'm glad someone noticed!!...hehe...I thought it was funny to give him a strange obsession with food...lol. Thanks for the review!

Name: rgfawkes (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 15:37 · For: Hogwarts
i love this chapter please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you muchly!

Name: Luna Longbottom (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 15:30 · For: Hogwarts
I love your story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope I can get chapter seven up as soon as I'm able to...

Name: i_luv_padfoot (Signed) · Date: 02/05/05 5:15 · For: Hogwarts
great chapter. i can't wait to find out if Ginny tells anyone in the school or if Ron, Hermione or Giny go and visit tom that would be funny . wow great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Ron and Hermione really want to meet Tom, but deep down inside they are reminded that Tom is Voldemort...and the thought freaks them out...Ginny, however, wants to hex him...lol...:D

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