Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 03/01/05 15:25
Chapter: Attack

Noooo.....*drops down and faints, wakes up and gets up and looks at the scrreen* Noooooo......*drops down and faints, wakes up and gets up and looks at the scrreen* NOOOOOOOOOO! *drops down and faints, wakes up and gets up and looks at the scrreen* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *drops down and faints, wakes up and gets up and looks at the scrreen* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Please NOOOOOOO!

Author's Response: *watches and faints from all of the fainting* I'M SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-( :-(

Reviewer: Tap
Date: 02/28/05 16:15
Chapter: Transition


Author's Response: Arghh!! I'm so sorry!! I had to do it!!! :-(

Reviewer: Colloportus
Date: 02/27/05 20:34
Chapter: Transition

*turns blue from laughing and not breathing* oh my gosh the deleted scene was brilliant!! PLEASE write another story like this i beg of you XD

Author's Response: *provides oxygen tank* LOL, thank you!!!!!!!!! I'm thinkin' about writing a serious story, and then I'm gonna write another story like this, I think...:D

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 02/27/05 19:31
Chapter: Transition

You are really talented at writing. I hope you write more in the future!

Author's Response: whoopsy :D

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 02/27/05 19:31
Chapter: Transition

You are really talented at writing. I hope you write more in the future!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!!! That's so nice of you. Do you really think so?? I'm planning out my next story but it seems like it's gonna be

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 02/27/05 10:09
Chapter: Attack

Maybe, if I close my eyes another chapter will appear. *Concentrates* NO!! IT WON'T END! NO!!!!! PLEASE!

Author's Response: I'm sorry!!!!!! I had to!! *sniffles again*

Reviewer: Shaolin
Date: 02/27/05 1:08
Chapter: Awaiting

Tom froze in the process of closing the drawer. "Wait a minute, what did he just call me??" I was lmao when i read that. The story has been great so far i hope its got a great ending too.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Tom's kinda slow sometimes, isn't he?? lol...hope you enjoy chapter eight!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 02/26/05 19:37
Chapter: Transition

Greatest dtory ever its so funny the deleted scene was excellent

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm so glad you liked it!!! :D

Reviewer: Lizzygirl
Date: 02/25/05 20:29
Chapter: Transition

OMG that was bloody brilliant! HAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The deleted scene was great *wipes away the tears from laughing so hard*. The last chapter was really good! But, what is the deal with the underwear? Oh well *10* *Goes to cry and mourn because the story has come to an end*

Author's Response: Yay, thank you so much!!!! The underwear thing...that's Tom...he's completely obsessed with a certain pair of underwear Harry's got (they're green) and he wanted to steal them so bad...but Harry noticed they were gone...he just really likes that underwear. He's a weirdo, yep...LOL. *sniffles* Oh...I know! I feel terrible!

Reviewer: RemusMoonyLupin
Date: 02/23/05 20:09
Chapter: Transition

Wow BRILLIANT story!! it's so hilarious!! I love it! omg, Tom is the funniest person to bug in the whole story, I love it how Harry can control him. I definetly prefer Lord Voldemort at this age. Much less dark. I'm in Info Pro right now.. I'm trying to keep my laughter at a mimumum... its very difficult! Write more storys soon, I want to see other fabulous works by crimsonpheonix! 10!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!!! Oh, it was so funny making Harry have control over Tom--I loved doing those parts. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! I'm trying to put together a developing story in my head, it's just!!! 10's are awesome!! :D :D

Reviewer: The Savant
Date: 02/23/05 15:53
Chapter: Transition

A satisfying ending, I would say, to an overall entertaining fic. Those inward reflections of Albus and Tom were really great. I found the Dudley thing at the end a bit unnecessary, however, and there was definitly more room for plot resolution.

Author's Response: Thank you! The thing with Dudley was added for both pure entertainment and also to help with the length of the chapter, which would have been absurdly short without it. lol. By plot resolution...I don't know what you mean...because I'm stupid with my writing terms...hehe..sorry.

Reviewer: Scheherazade
Date: 02/22/05 1:30
Chapter: Transition

And the hormones. Damn, almost makes you want to feel sorry for the teenagers. *gasps for breath after laughing for ten straight minutes* That was hilarious !!! I'm sad that this is it, but I'll be looking out for more of your stories. This one definitely gets an A++++++. ((btw, us teens aren't that bad, lol. ;-) ))

Author's Response: LOL, thank you so much!!! It makes me so happy to know that everyone enjoyed reading it just as much as I did writing was immensely fun. :D Ohh...I know, I'm fifteen...hehe...blame it on Tom, he's an over-exaggerater. :D :D He's so evil...J/K. ;)

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 02/21/05 21:56
Chapter: Transition

WONDERFUL!!!!!! I give it a 10! the end you wrote "Dudley does get a round two of being sat on by Dudley." The first Dudley should be Tom (I want to become and editor). But excellent story!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ms_potco
Date: 02/21/05 20:40
Chapter: Transition

it was really good! the idea was really original! i wish you would have written more but i won't complain it was awsome.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks a bunch!!!!! I hope I can start on a story I've got in my head, but there's not telling it will be as successful as this one...I sure hope so!

Reviewer: SiriuslyPadfoot12
Date: 02/21/05 20:09
Chapter: Transition

Oh my God. That was SO awesome. I really wish you'd write more. ::dies laughing:: Oh, that's HILARIOUS!! But one line really got me: As they watched, they saw Voldemort fall to the ground in a super-slick area of mud. And also: the pair watched closely as he eased out of the mud and appeared to be speaking to the mud on the ground (quite aggressively) for a minute, then turned sharply on his heel and left into the Forest. And I absolutely LOVED the "deleted scene" at the end. I laughed out loud!!! Which is why my numerous family members are giving me funny looks...

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked that part, because it wasn't part of my first draft--I added it in the second time I checked over it. :D Now I'm very glad I did, because someone noticed! LOL. Hehe...I get those funny looks from my family all the time...sometimes they think I'm a psychopath, I know, but...ah well...;)

Reviewer: Auror316
Date: 02/21/05 17:58
Chapter: Transition

Really great job. This has been one of the most interesting fanfics that I have read in a while. It sucks that it's the end, but I do hope that you will write more stories. Great fic! 10!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you muchly!!! Yay, a 10!!!!! I'm planning out another but I don't think it will be in the humor's kinda dark, but I will definitely write more humor stories in the future. I love doing funny stuff--it's!! ;)

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 02/21/05 15:39
Chapter: Transition

Great job! I really loved reading this final chapter. *tear* I'm going to miss Harry and Tom's bickering! I can't wait to read another story of yours!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! I've got my mind on a story, but I'm still trying to come up with a way it will work, ya know? Maybe someday I'll be able to put it together so that it makes sense... :D

Reviewer: meva
Date: 02/21/05 14:39
Chapter: Transition

i will miss reading this.Thanks for putting in teh deleted scene it was hilarious and I couldnt stop laughing!

Author's Response: LOL, you're welcome, and thank you!!! :D Glad you laughed so hard!

Reviewer: rgfawkes
Date: 02/21/05 12:38
Chapter: Transition

i will miss this fic alot!!! I LOVED THE END!! the deleted scene was hilarious!!!! it had me grabbing my side from laughing!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! But--Ohh--are you okay?? J/K. LOL, I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much while it lasted. !!! I laughed so much writing the end...I couldn't resist putting it in...

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 02/21/05 9:01
Chapter: Attack! It's not over...I forbid you! How dare you! Nooooooooooooo! Please have mercy! COME ON! PLEASE! TELL ME IT"S A JOKE! IF IT IS IT'S NOT FUNNY!

Author's Response: *shrinks and says in squeaky voice* I'm so sorry!!! But I'm not joking...don't kill me! *runs away* Sorry!!!!

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