Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/27/06 16:26
Chapter: Progress

He had even learned the different colors of underwear Harry had. Yes, quite disturbing, but true. It wasn't really information Lord Voldemort needed, but oh well.
I thought that part was soooo funny! I LOVE it! Can't wait to read the rest of the other chapters.

Author's Response: lol I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!! Thank you!

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/27/06 15:18
Chapter: Work

The world will end the day Harry and Voldemort get along with eachother. This was very funny. I like it a lot!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review--I love 'em! lol :-)

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/27/06 15:00
Chapter: Teenagers

This chapter was very well written. Good Job!! LOL!! :P

Author's Response: Wow--thanks a bunch!! hehe

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/27/06 13:31
Chapter: Dursleys

OH!! This is GREAT!!!!!!!!!! I love it! RocK on!!! :)

Author's Response: Woohoo! Thanks!! :-)

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/26/06 18:32
Chapter: Attack

*falls down laughing* This is WAND-erful! This is soooo totally funny!!! Can I have your autograph???? :)

Author's Response: lol thank you!!!!!!!!! Yes, you can have my autograph: *Sara, aka Crimsonphoenix1* lol

Reviewer: EastAngel
Date: 05/26/06 7:34
Chapter: Transition

i wont say anything bad. i loved it...
i havent laughed so much over a story in ages... its a good change from teh normal ones u find on this website... all dark. this one is funny... 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad you've noticed that...I had definitely noticed the lack of some good funny stories and decided to make one completely different than all the was fun. lol.

Reviewer: hermionerocks42
Date: 05/20/06 10:54
Chapter: Transition

very,very good story

Author's Response: Yay--thank you so much for reviewing!!! I'm glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: hermionerocks42
Date: 05/20/06 10:28
Chapter: Progress

really good so far

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :-)

Reviewer: SheWhoMustNotBNamed
Date: 05/20/06 3:36
Chapter: Progress

Okay, another spooky moment. O.O Dumbledore telling them, "How about I be dead by then?" I dont know if youre gonna read this review since it's been awhile the story has ended, but can you validate for me when you did finish it? It's pretty coincedentual don't ya think? Anyway, you still got a couple of gems in there. Tom & Albus' dialouge about power kinda sounded like God talking to the Devil. Weird, did u mean to do that? That would be a good symbolic relationship. But 4 both our sakes, I wont get into it.=P Oh yeah, I like the bowling game between Tom & Albus. Pretty cute.=)

Author's Response: found things I must have done unconsciously! That's cool! Like, the God & Devil thing. I suppose in a way I kinda meant it like that...yet, I didn't do it purposely...but awesome! lol. Well, I first posted this story on, then found this site and decided to post it here too. I finished this story around December of 2004, according to It took me a little more than four months to finish it, I'd say. But I'm glad you pointed these things out to me...that's really cool and weird at the same time! lol Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: SheWhoMustNotBNamed
Date: 05/20/06 1:28
Chapter: Work

Kinda weird that Albus told Tom to go jump off the cliff. Didn't u finish this before HBP? Maybe you're psychic? Either that or u got an Outstanding for your divination class yeah? Story is still interesting, good job!

Author's Response: It was the Outstanding in Divination. I'm just kidding!! lol. It is kinda weird, huh... Thank you!!!

Reviewer: SheWhoMustNotBNamed
Date: 05/20/06 0:52
Chapter: Teenagers

Tom making breakfast for Albus? What, no bacon? =) I kinda wished there was more of a confrontation between Tom & Dudders, like them fighting for food, the remote control or maybe the Playstation? The possibilities are endless! Maybe in the next upcoming chaps.

Author's Response: Yeah, looking back at this story there are things I wished I would have changed...perhaps made it longer...! Bacon sounds pretty good right now

Reviewer: SheWhoMustNotBNamed
Date: 05/20/06 0:23
Chapter: Dursleys

...Albus watched for a second as Harry choked Tom, wondering if this was how the prophecy would be fulfilled one day, by suffocation... too much..ha,ha,ha! =D Also the, "Lord Voldemort is very hygenic, thank you very much" answer was damn hilarious!!! You definately have the right sense of humor to be writing this story!!! In fact, ANY humor fic that you set your mind to. Props to u Crimsonphoenix1!!!

Author's Response: Really?? Wow--thanks!! I actually wrote this story based on my own personality, I guess you could say. I have a strange sense of humor sometimes, though. haha. :-) Thanks again!

Reviewer: SheWhoMustNotBNamed
Date: 05/19/06 23:18
Chapter: Attack

Very good introduction, had me smiling and giggling to myself...great idea for a humor fic! Bratty is gonna be hilarious, cant wait for him to meet Bratty Dudleykins. :) hee,hee...(off to read the rest of the chapters...)

Author's Response: lol Thank you!!!! I'm thrilled you're enjoying this so far!!! Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/12/06 2:27
Chapter: Teenagers

I would name my kid "Penguin."

What happened to the Horcruxes? Is Tom complete at age 16, or is he still only 1/7 of himself?

Author's Response: I began writing this story a while after GOF, then after the release of OOTP, I went back and revised it, finishing shortly thereafter. So I had no idea about the Horcruxes at that point. LOL :-) But, that's a good question. I made the story where only his physical attributes changed, not his "soul", if you will, so I guess I'd say at that point he was still 1/7 of himself. lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 05/07/06 18:52
Chapter: Attack

ok i've only just read the first chapter but i have to say i just read the summary and started laughing. this is going to be hilarious i just know it voldemort already makes me laugh.

Author's Response:, I hope you find the story as funny as the summary!!! hehe let me know what you think! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: potteronpotluvhim
Date: 05/07/06 0:10
Chapter: Transition

toatally out of character voldie wise but interesting...

Author's Response: Thanks--but I meant to make him out of character...something about him being Tom around Harry had affected him that short period of time when he was actually Voldie in the story, at least, that's what I wanted to get across..but thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: FlyingPheonix
Date: 05/06/06 18:24
Chapter: Transition

Oh DUDLEY!!!!Lol!!!

Author's Response: LOL oh yeah he was a bit too excited about sitting on Tom huh? lol!!

Reviewer: Firebreather
Date: 05/05/06 23:49
Chapter: Transition

I laughed so hard at that last "deleted scene" my mom asked if I was OK! You're a great writer, and you have and amazing ability to write a very convincing and hilarious plot. You should deffinitly keep writing.

Author's Response: Really?? Wow, thanks so much!! That means a whole lot to hear that! I'm hoping someday that I get around to starting on another story! I guess I procrastinate too much!! lol Thanks again very much for the review!!!!!

Reviewer: hpaddict626
Date: 05/05/06 5:17
Chapter: Attack

haha...good thing I found this story again...I have read this even before I registered here in MNFF. As of now I read this story twice...nice change you know, it's getting really boring here at home (its summer at our place)...tnx 4 makin me laugh! make more humor stories!

Author's Response: Wow!! I'm very happy that you can read the story twice and still be okay with it. I feel good now...thank you so much!!! I wonder where whether you've read this here or somewhere else. Yeah, it's starting to get summer here too..I can relate to your being bored! lol. Thanks again for reviewing!! :-)

Reviewer: Mrs_Moony_Lupin
Date: 04/29/06 11:22
Chapter: Transition

bwahahah dudley sitting on voldemort!!!! oh thats just 2 good!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :-) That was one of the funnest (if that's a word..) parts to write!! Thanks!!

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