Reviews For Keep on Loving You
Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 05/24/11 19:24
Chapter: ... Because Its the Only Thing I Want to Do

aaahhh! this is so sweet! your FIRST fanfic? a 1000 reads? that's pretty impressive. i'm going to check if u have other stories...

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes this was my first fanfic. And yeah, I guess that many people read. Who's to say whether they liked it or not? But all my other stories are on fanfiction.net. Under the same penname. Glad you liked the story

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 02/21/10 14:12
Chapter: ... Because Its the Only Thing I Want to Do

I really liked the wedding parts of it. I thought that it really captured the essence of the Ginny-Harry relationship and the emotions of a wedding. Though I might've had Ginny say that she had RARELY seen her mother cry, not never, since we've seen her cry a decent amount across the novels.
The proposal part though was really full of fluff. Fluff is one thing, but this was maybe a little too much, and it didn't fit with the tone of the rest of the story. It's a little rough to go so quickly from Ginny's tone of emotion and dignified overjoy to one of giddy, fluffy, karaoke-induced excitement. I think it's a neat idea for a proposal, but I think the tone could've changed to make it fit more easily into the rest of the story.
I kind of felt like the story could be told without the story of the proposal in the middle, and the reader wouldn't have felt something was missing. Along the same vein, I think that just about any proposal story could fit in there, since the rest of the story doesn't rely on what actually transpired there except the main idea that he proposed. I think it could've been a proposal story that slip more seamlessly into the wedding story's tone.

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback! I do realize that Molly has cried before. I just didn't realize it when I was writing this. I think I was more trying to show how strong of a person she is. And yeah, I see that the tone was completely different, but I wasn't very much focused on that. I had an idea and I wanted to put it down. Never claim to be a great writer, but a writer non the less. I appreciate the feedback

Reviewer: Yellow Luna
Date: 10/08/09 16:06
Chapter: ... Because Its the Only Thing I Want to Do

love it!!!!

Author's Response: thanks for reading and im glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 01/30/09 3:18
Chapter: ... Because Its the Only Thing I Want to Do

aww... this is SO sweet!  the KARAOKE bit was great! I would have felt awkward in her place :)

Author's Response: Im glad you liked it! And yes it would be very awkward!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 10/15/08 19:05
Chapter: ... Because Its the Only Thing I Want to Do

lol that was a nice little fic. i thought it was funny that george did the ceremony.

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought that putting a known character in that spot would work best and George fit the bill, so to speak.

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 10/11/08 7:47
Chapter: ... Because Its the Only Thing I Want to Do

Aww that was a rather cute oneshot at why Harry preposed. There is nothing I like more then a little bit of Harry/Ginny fluff.

If anyone has a reason why they should not be wed, speak now or forever hold your peace. And you better hold your peace."
Hehe- that made me laugh. Just one thing: "Finally Hermione said, "Yeah, Ginny, we did."
The punctuation is not right there - I'm not sure if you mean:
"Finally," Hermione said, "Yeah, Ginny, we did."
or
Finally Hermione said, "Yeah, Ginny, we did."
Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Aww i missed that. Thanks. I'll go change it Glad you like the story. That always seemed like something George would say

Reviewer: Saracura
Date: 09/23/08 20:21
Chapter: ... Because Its the Only Thing I Want to Do

cool :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Im glad to see that there's someone out there that liked the story.

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