I'm really loving this story, and I can't wait to find out what happens next in the sonia-jjames-peter trilemma. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. I have a half written chapter that I need to get around to finishing. I'm just trying to get some other things out of the way, that's the problem. Glad you're enjoying the story. ~Carole~
Please continue this! I have been checking up on this gem for ages, and I adore it! Can't wait to find out more about Lily's "friend". Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've got a bit stuck with this, it's true but I have a half written chapter somewhere so I hope to get back to it soon. ~Carole~
Author's Response: I will, but it's going to take time, largely due to other things I start writing *sigh*. Sorry, I know it must be infuriating. Thank you for sticking with me. ~Carole~
this story is amazing, i love your characterization, especially the marauders, they are all great, even peter, he seems so nice in lions but i guess that will change. i know it hasn't been long since the last chapter but please update again soon , i don't think i could wait another nine months.
Author's Response: I'll try and I do want to finish this. I have started the next chapter, but i got bogged down in other things and I didn;t want to risk the next chapter being rushed and not good (I'm not sure tha last chapter was as good, if I'm honest.) Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying it. ~Carole~
so far I dont like rich soule.
Author's Response: No one likes Rich Soule - *sigh*. Thank you ~Carole~
awwwwww!!! theyre on a first name basis!!!!
Author's Response: Yay, they are! But it's only the beginning of sixth year. There's a long way to go .... Thank you.~Carole~
This website and Lions of Gryffindor have MADE my life. Your OC's, characterisation and story are wow. I just read all 21 chapters in one sitting! Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. There are lots of amazing stories on this site, so I hope you settle in and find some others to read. (I've got quite a few more - hee.) I will keep writing this, but progress is a bit slow as I tend to work on a lot of other things as well., Thank you, again ~Carole~
I don't like Rich. At all. Ever. The end.
Sorry - I hope I'm not supposed to. He lied to Lily about being a Muggle-born and he's so obviously casing the school for something! And even if he's not, which he is, he's still incredibly cocky and so, so rude to James at the Quidditch pitch. Bah. You've inspired strong feelings in me - which is a good thing, I suppose. Just don't let me down: get rid of him. Please.
Okay, now that's out of the way, I can say it was good to read an update! James and Sonia are very sweet and I loved the end when he did the right thing by her and admitted everything. Wow, Sirius was a real jerk there for a bit. The only problem with James standing up for her was that it was obviously harsh for Peter, and I feel a bit bad for them both and what that might mean for their friendship. Well done on that twist as well. I also like Phyll.
I hope the next chapter is coming along well… and that Rich goes back to his stupid Quodpot game in America asap.
Just kidding…sort of.
Author's Response: I'm giggling that one of my OCs is inspiring such hatred - hee hee hee. Trouble is, I usually write them and then start liking them (sigh Sonia) but with Rich there is a very, very clear story with him which will become apparant. yeah, he was pretty rude to James, but he'd see it as showing interest. Phyll wasn't impressed. Bear in mind that Lily really hasn't had a boyfriend before, so she's going to be a bit bowled over no matter how savvy she usually is.
Thank you very much for the review. Made my day. >br>
YAY A LIONS UPDATE! :).
I hate Rich and his 'little white lies'. I hope Lily catches him in one that isn't so little next time.
And Sonia…I hate that I know she and James have to break up eventually, which has never happened before because Lily/James is one of my favorite ships. I"m so glad her and James's relationship is in the open now, though I do feel bad for Peter :(. Poor guy always seems to get the short end of the stick.
Also, I love the idea you've come up with for Sirius to make money - it's totally original firstly, and secondly I love the 'friendship' clue at the end (you should write crosswords).
Author's Response: I could take this AU ... heh heh. Harry would have a blonde mother. Mind you, then Snape wouldn't have tried to bargain with Voldy and ... very AU. Um, yes, splitting up James and Sonia is probably going to be very hard ... but there is a plan ... of sorts. I do a lot of crosswords, and had some help from Jim, - hee hee. I'm not sure this plan of Sirius' will work, but he has a few more ideas. Thanks for the review ~Carole~
Oh noooo. Things are getting worse for James, and I think the "bad" side of Rich is coming out. He's such a twat, though, Rich is. I thought it was really mean and sexist of him to say that a boy would be better suited as a Beater. But I can also see how much Lily likes him, so I hope he doesn't try to take advantage of her or anything. We'll see...
And I'm glad James came out with it, though how long Peter won't talk to him for is anyone's guess. Aww, I feel sorry for him now, even if he is a rat >.>
I'm interested to see where this will be going! Sonia, Phyllida, Mary and Martha are some of the best OCs I've come across in fanfic and I think you characterised all of them really well. An excellent chapter as always, Carole. :)
P.S. I did notice a few errors ("ion" instead of "in") and a couple of missing full stops.
Author's Response: Thankieees. OOH, yes I can see the ion, now. I shall have to check through again for the fullstops. I hate editing though - it screws things up. Nooo.
Thank you for the review, and I'm really pleased that you like the OC's. I'm rather fond of those three as well. ~Carole~
ZOMG LOG IS BACKKKKK! :D:D:D:DExciting chapter! I loved the Crossword clue at the end. But more than anything, I want to know what that Soule is up to. And poor Peter. :/
Author's Response: Soule is about to elope with Lily. They have a child called Gropius, who is the same year as ... um ... the Twins. He's a Ravenclaw, and no one noticed him before because ... er ... well you'll have to read the next chapter. Thankxxxxxxx!!
Are you going to update this? *sniffle*
Author's Response: Yes, I will. I'm very busy at the moment finishing other things and RL work etc, but I'm planning to devote a large chunk of October and November to getting this moving again. Sorry for the wait, but something had to give. ~Carole~
i love this story, its my favourite fan fic, please update soon!
Author's Response: I will get back to this asap. I'm just trying to sort out some other stories. Thank you for readinga nd reviewing. ~Carole~
I'm truly, really, most sincerely looking forward to the next chapters of the story. I think that the characterization and your understanding of the Marauders are the best among other MNFF authors.
I especially like your interception on James' character and the dilemma that he was facing (always being the one doing the pining). Allow me to say this, but I don't quite think that Remus would let his guard down on his being a werewolf and I don't think that he would open up his mind merely because of the Dumbledore's words (sorry, but this is rather like a review on the overall story)
Anyway, I think that the story had won a most well-deserved prize and I reeeeaaallly look forward for new stories on the marauders and updates on this one (I'm checking daily!)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I wouldn't check daily, as I'm rather busy, but if you add me to favourites then you should get an email when I update. I hope to have a new chapter up at the end of September, but I'm currently trying to finish some other things.
Regarding Remus, I would respectfully disagree because I think teenage Remus at Hogwarts and still safe with his friends around him, is VERY different from the man who first appears in POA having been battered by the deaths of his friends and the imprisonment of another.
As far as Marauder stories go, I have a few more, but another author you will love is Gmariam, who writes beautiful and funny James/Lily stories.
Thanks again and I will try to update soon. ~Carole~
I really really hope you finish this story. The characterization is brilliant. The Marauders are hard to capture, but I definitely think you've succeeded. Plus, your OCs do not blend into the background, as they do in so many fics. Pleeeeease continue this wonderul story!
Author's Response: I will continue. It was my first ever story on MNFF and I still love it, but I'm trying to finish other things first. Thanks for your patience. ~Carole~
Ah, I take it that silvery version of James was Harry in the pensieve? Interesting! Makes ya wonder how the pensieve actually works then, huh? (:
Author's Response: Yes, he sees Harry but thinks it's himself. This will get mentioned again at the end of the story. My theory on that point was that because of the genetic connection and the emotions both were feeling at the time caused Harry to become slightly visible. Thanks for the review ~Carole~
luv it please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I will be updating and finishing the story, but I'm focussing on something else at the moment. Then I shall come back and concentrate on this. Glad you're enjoying the story. ~Carole~
I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When are you going to publish the next chapter? I am so excited for it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I'm taking a small break from it because I'm trying to finish other things, but I will return at some stage.I love this story too much to dump it. ~Carole~
This is defiantly one of best fan fictions I have read! I just love it! The characters are so great, it makes me feel sad to think most of them end up dead. I can't wait for the next update, its getting so interesting. I really want to know what will happen with Rich and with James and Sonia.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. yes, I want to know what will happen with James and Sonia. Don;t worry, I do know, I'm just having trouble finding time to write it all. ~Carole~
Wow... I really adore this story. I've been reading a lot of Marauders' Fanfiction, but this is the only fic that I think that matches the characters J.K Rowling created. I love how you portray the Lily/James relantionship because is believable; it couldn't happen over night, they both had to mature enough to develop the love that would have Harry as a result.
James, Sirius, Remus and Lily have always had a special place in my heart, and this story is making me love them even more.
This story is even making me love Peter!! Well, the Peter of this story anyway. It's going to be very difficult to read when or if you write the part about the betrayal. I think that's the bittersweet part about writng or reading a story about the marauders' era; read about this beautiful and amazing frienship knowing that it ended in such a horrible way.
All the same, I can't wait for your update!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the lovely review. There may be a bit of a wait for the next chapter whilst I get on with some other fics and an original fic, but I will get this finished. I am glad you're enjoying the story and am especially pleased you think my version of the Marauders is close to JK's. ~Carole~