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Name: The_Dream_Team (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 11:01 · For: Chapter 14 - Cold Light of Day
I enjoyed this chapter! hmmmm.... i wonder who the wand belongs to! fabian maybe... but please update soon cause i love this fic and congratz with the quicksilver quill award!

Author's Response: Hmmm, I think they would have recognised Fabian... although he is a bit of a ladies man... Thanks for the review.

Name: XxCourtneyxCeexX (Signed) · Date: 12/31/09 17:34 · For: Chapter 1 Turning Point
Brilliant XD god i really do love this story loads!!! when is the next chapter coming up?? pleasee post it soon! i really want to read more, this is one of the most amazing fan fiction storys made, and i am just DYING to find out more!! =O
love Courtney x

Author's Response: Next Chapter will be up very, very soon - I promise. Thank you for reading and reviewing. ~Carole~

Name: 94Hippogriffs (Signed) · Date: 12/16/09 23:54 · For: Chapter 1 Turning Point
This is the most realistic and well written story I have read so far. I love the characters, and it is very easy to believe that this is an extension of the real books. Very well done, keep writing!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The fact that you think it could be an extension of the books means a great deal to me. ~Carole~

Name: lily_evans_potter (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 17:10 · For: Chapter 1 Turning Point
very good

Author's Response: Thank you

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/15/09 16:51 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
finially after a wek of notbeign able to acces a computer I can leave a relpy. i'm going to have to go back and leave replys to all teh fantastic chapters you wrote. I realy love your story, It is so belivable.

You pay such attention to detail that I can actualyl feel liek I am there. An still you manage not to ever drag out a moment to te exten of makign it dull. You nearly made my cry with Remus's transformation it is just so well described.

You characters contunue to ispire me. You have taken the pure basics and turned them into somethign fnatastic. The way Sirius insists on beign there for his friends, despite the danger or perhaps also for the danger. How james isn't always the msot insightful btu eh tries. The way Peter cares abotu his friends and does worry about why he is a rat and isn't just pushed nto the bakc. I liek hwo you inculde him in the story and make it believable that he is a maruder. Lily an mary are very well protrayed as well.

As for Remus you have ortrayed his superbly. He still has the typeical worry of "it's not afe for her, should i tell her should I not" but you can also clearly understand why he is a maruder.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Pelase pelase up date it soon. I want to knwo who the mystery man is, and hwo the guys find out. I want to know what Remus will do about Mary? and what is going on between Fabian and Poppy, and I crave for more sirisu and James. After all james is behaving so well with Lly it's realyl endearing.

I really enoy your writing. pelase up date soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the reviews you've left for Lions. This really is my favourite story, and I know I have to update soon. Bear with me, I'm writing some other things at the moment, but I do have the next set of chapters planned ... somewhere. Mystery man will be reavealed very soon, by the way. Thanks again ~Carole~

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 21:39 · For: Chapter 7 - Treacle Tart and Quidditch.
I love your OC characters mary and martha are brilliant, and james's parents are very endering. I love how sirius has his own special relationship with them specially with Hally. This chapter was also very fun. I enjoy your style of writing.

Author's Response: Not sure i've ever said thank you for all your reviews - so 'Thank you'. It is appreciated. ~Carole~

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 21:22 · For: Chapter 6- Godric's Hollow.
That chapter was amazing it made me laugh a lot. I love jamse's parents. And i liek the way you explain teh relationship between sev and lily. As always sirius is priceless

Author's Response: I am very slowly responding to your reviews - sorry for the dealy. I appreciate all the reviews and am glad you're enjoying the story ~Carole~

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 21:06 · For: Chapter 5 - An Intriguing Muggle Girl.
Jade is an intersting character for Sirius to encounter. I love how you protray Regulus, he still loes his brother but he is also loyal to his family. This was a good interpretation of sirius' departure.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond. ~Carole~

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 20:50 · For: Chapter 4 - The Bowtruckle Challenge
Go lily!!!! That was defenetly a brave and noble thing to do. I wonder who wins the challenge now since Lily got most of the points.

Author's Response: Inadequate and well overdue response, but thank you fro reading, enjoying and reviewing. ~Carole~

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 20:21 · For: Chapter 3 - A Wand, a Boggart and a Wager.
That bet is entirley too funny.I like how the characters interact and how you show their fears and htoughts about more then jsut the issue at hand. Nicley done. You've got my interest.

Author's Response: Thank you

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 19:43 · For: Chapter 2- Advice From The Fat Lady
hmm this chapter was really interesting. I had never really thought what the maruder prenks would mean to the rest of gryffindor. I always jsut assumed that they liked the amusement. But it makes even more sence that they are mad about it. As for how James treats Lily it is endearing it really shows his caring and comprehensive anture we see that too in how he treats remus and even in how he desides to stop bugging snape. I liek the story so far.

Author's Response: Badly overdue response, but thank you very much for reviewing. ~Carole~

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 19:26 · For: Chapter 1 Turning Point
I partcularly like your caracterization. The characters seem believable. In this case I feel like they are more then just the standard James, serious and remus. Whiel their given personalities are present you add a touch to them that make s them a little more human. I liked how mcGonagall is in character. The house points really add to theslight humor after a tense situation. I can't wait to rea dhte rest

Author's Response: Sorry it has taken me so long to respond.I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for the review. ~Carole~

Name: jamlil (Signed) · Date: 10/27/09 12:30 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
hey it was a good chapter. i want to read more and soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review ... I'm working on the next chapter now. ~Carole|~

Name: the_quiveringquill (Signed) · Date: 10/11/09 22:43 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
great chapter.. this always happens to remus (do i tell her? do i not?) in the end he always just causes himself more pain... cant wait for an update!!! ur so good. if u evr need a beta I'm free. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Remus is a bit of an idiot at times, but in this case perhaps he has cause to fear what will happen . ~Carole~

Name: U-No-Poo (Signed) · Date: 10/10/09 19:30 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
Love this fic! Update ASAP!

Author's Response: I'll try my best. Thanks for reading, reviewing and enjoying. ~Carole~

Name: misirius (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 22:48 · For: Chapter 11 - Potent Potions
I love the story -- one small error, though: in the part “Don’t tell me you’re feeling guilty about leaving!” exclaimed James, a slight note of impatience entering his voice. “For Merlin’s sake, Prongs, it’s not your fault you have a maniac for a mum.", it should say "For Merlin's sake, Padfoot", not "Prongs".
Can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: WOWE! Can't believe I missed that error! Thank you so much for pointing that out ... eeek! Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. ~Carole~

Name: SilverLily (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 8:26 · For: Chapter 10 Caught in the Crossfire
Squee! Fabian is there! :D

Author's Response: Yep! Watch out for Fabian. Thanks for reviewing.

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 22:34 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
Excellent chapter. It will be interesting to see what Remus decides to do about Mary. Hopefully Sirius will make a full recovery without having to go back to Madam Pomfrey. And the man in the Forbidden Forest. A Death Eater maybe? Hope it wasn't Fabian Prewett. I'm sure he would have been told about Remus, but nobody knows about the rest of the Marauders taking the wolf out for adventures. Wonder how they'll find out who's wand it is? They can't exactly go to Dumbledore for help. Something is definitely bothering Wormtail. More than worrying about Sirius head injury. Is he already looking for someone powerful to turn to when he leaves school?

Author's Response: They'd have recognised Prewett. They didn't recognise this man. Hmmm, Wormtail? Perhaps you're overthinking him. It is a tense time for everyone after all. Thanks for the review. ~Carole~

Name: ahattab33 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 16:18 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
*Sigh* There will be no AA today. I've reached the end of this story and someone gave me real work to do. :(

But, now I will be awaiting updates with everyone else.

Oh, what a scene with his transformation. I found myself thinking, "Oh, please tell her. You deserve someone to hold you and to turn to." He's got his friends, but he needs a woman. Someone like Mary! Ack, boys can be so dumb. And the transformation itself was brief but so intense - to imagine that he goes through that month after month is a powerful thing.

I imagine Peter must be so frustrated; he repeatedly warns them of the danger of going into the woods; they don't listen. Turns out he's right, and even though he doesn't go "I told you so!" they don't even acknowledge he had tried to warn them. They are light-hearted, and when he tried to bring them back down to earth, they focus for about five seconds.

I have no idea what Sirius pulls out of his robes at the end - are we supposed to know from the French, or is it a great mystery for the next chapter? And now we have a mysterious figure to add to the drama! All of this I now have to wait for. *Sob*


Author's Response: Oh, no, it's the mystery man's wand. He snatched it out of the man's hand when he was a dog. "Cherchez le sourciere!" actually means "Find the wizard (or sourcerer) in French. It's Sirius trying to be sophisticated - ha ha. Thank you for all 13 reviews today, Amanda. They've been amazing ~Carole~

Name: bluekiwi (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 16:01 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
I absolutly loved this chapter! i've been waiting so long for it to be updated! i love how you write your characters and how roguish you make sirius, he's my favourite :)
please please please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. I was worried about this chapter, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I shall update soonish, I hope, but I'm having laoptop problems and lots of other writing stuff. Glad you liked this and took the time to review ~Carole~

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