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Name: tonkzie (Signed) · Date: 07/15/10 2:53 · For: Chapter 17 -Chaperone
wow, this is really good. Can I ask you something? Is this like the mauranders era thats mentioned in 'Apparently Asleep'? Because you got martha who dated sirius, remus's dad's a clerk, and if it is then would i be right in assuming that mary wouldn't take remus being a werewolf well. Because Martha mentioned it to Tonks. Anyway, sorry if I got this wrong, i was just wondering if there was a link.

Author's Response: I don't mind you asking at all. Originally Apparently Asleep was supposed to be separate, but then I liked the way Martha was developing in Lions, so I added her to AA. They are compliant with each other, so you may get the occasional spoiler (ie Mary and Remus) but then we all knew that Remus didn't marry Mary Macdonald, so it's not too muchof a spoiler (I hope). Glad you like both fics. ~Carole~

Name: hestiajones (Signed) · Date: 07/15/10 0:52 · For: Chapter 17 -Chaperone
Uhm yeah, I liked that. Bring on the next one. :P

*is so not reading at work*


Author's Response: ... but the next chapter is the one where ... *sigh*. It will be up soon. Glad you liked that, Natalie - Now ... GET BACK TO WORK! ~Carole~

Name: Gmariam (Signed) · Date: 07/14/10 19:49 · For: Chapter 3 - A Wand, a Boggart and a Wager.
Ah, you write original characters so well. Loved the insight with the Boggarts into James and Sirius's character! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: I think that's possibly one of my favourite characters because I've started to love those girls rather a lot - possibly because I want to be one of them. Thanks for the review, Gina. ~Carole~

Name: Gmariam (Signed) · Date: 07/14/10 19:36 · For: Chapter 2- Advice From The Fat Lady
Oh, I liked the Fat Lady, she was fun! And great way to introduce Frank and Alice. McLaggen was the best, though - great connection!
Lovely moment with James watching over LIly, and great little spat at the end!
It might take me a while to catch up, but I'm finally reading it! Yay! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: YAY! You're reading and reviewing. Wow, I look at these early chapters and think 'Huh?', ha ha, I do still like my Fat Lady, though. ~Carole~

Name: MetamorphmagusInDisguise (Signed) · Date: 07/14/10 13:20 · For: Chapter 17 -Chaperone
I love this story so much! I have a bad feeling James is accidnetally leading Sonia on :( I hope not though. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I think James is just being a normal sixteen year old boy ... and Sonia is supposed to be rather beautiful ... Thanks for the review - next chapter will be very soon (hopefully next week) ~Carole~

Name: aubinator (Signed) · Date: 07/03/10 14:38 · For: Chapter 16 - 'Feeble Girls'
Agh!!! Hurry!

Author's Response: I'm trying ... but curses to Real Life getting in the way. ~Carole~

Name: Amalieee (Signed) · Date: 07/03/10 8:46 · For: Chapter 16 - 'Feeble Girls'
When will we see the next chapter :-D?

Author's Response: I have nearly finished writing it (I promise), but James is proving to be a nuisance ... or rather Sirius is being the nuisance and James keeps trying to avoid him *sigh*. Anyway, sorry for the dealy, but I promise you I'm nearly done. ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 20:32 · For: Chapter 16 - 'Feeble Girls'
OH!!! This was such an AMAZING Chapter. I am not sure how i feel about the Lily-Rich thing, but then again, she has to date someone else before she realises she loves James. But i can't fight the feeling that Rich is a bad guy, Maybe i am just jealous for James. I am not sure, but i do know without a doubt that your story is just sensational. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I am so excited to see why Rich was in the forest, and what is going to happen!! I am so happy with your writing. Looking forward to the next chapter!! :o)

Author's Response: Thank you soi much for all your reviews - ha ha, you have been busy! Hmm, Rich is ... complicated ... that's all I'll say at the moment. Butr yeah, Lily does need someone to compare to James, doesn't she? ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 20:23 · For: Chapter 15 - Hogsmeade
Oh man, RICH! James is not gonig to be happy about this, especially because he almost got to ask her out. Oh man, I LOVE your writing, Phenomenal Story, I love it!

Author's Response: Ha ha - the fabulous Rich ... he had to appear again. No jmes is not a happy bunny, is he. Thanks for reviewing ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 20:18 · For: Chapter 14 - Cold Light of Day
:o) Love the James and Lily flirting, the obvious relationship between Fabian and Madam Pomfrey. I still love the Moony and Mary thing, he deserves love. So does Sirius, him and Martha is VERY cute. LOVE the writing, LOVE the characters, LOVE LOVE LOVE the story!

Author's Response: I like Martha too. In fact she turns up in my Remus/Tonks story (Apparently Asleep) and in a one shot, so I'm pleased you like her. Ah, Moony/Mary ... well lets's ee. She is good for him, I think but ... Thanks for reviewing ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 20:13 · For: Chapter 13 The Full Moon
OH MAN! Suspensful there for a minute, well i remember in POA Moony referenced their close calls, i guess this is onme of them! i love how you explain thing like this! I just LOVE this story. i am telling all my fellow potterheads to read this story. just because you are so awesome

Author's Response: OOOh, yesh, get the potterheads into MNFF and reading - we love all of you. Thank you for all your reviews ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 20:11 · For: Chapter 12 - Family Ties
:o) I love how Fabian plays in. Poor Moony, i feel so bad for him. Still love James and Lily and there obvious attraction that neither of them see, :o) I am just so happy with your story!

Author's Response: Lily's just too stubborn. Too used to seeing James in a bad light. That's her problem. Silly girl. ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 20:04 · For: Chapter 11 - Potent Potions
Ah, GREAT! LOVE the writing, love the story, love love love it! You really know how to do this! I love the progression! :o) Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you . Sorry my responses are becoming pathetic - but I'm rather overwhelmed., thank you very much. ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 20:00 · For: Chapter 10 Caught in the Crossfire
Ah the Sirius development with his brother, is GREAT! It really shows how different they are. I like how Lily is starting to warm up to James, which of course is adorable and just makes me love Moony so much more. Love your writing, love the story! :o)

Author's Response: Thank you .... Lily is warming to him ... a little bit.

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 19:54 · For: Chapter 9 Journeys to King's Cross
:o) Love the writing, love the story, love the characters!

Author's Response: Cool! Although I take no credit for the characters ... apart form Martha.

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 19:54 · For: Chapter 8 - Slythy Fen.
This is really great writing. You showed just exactly how much Snape seemed to change and how Lily is growning up, I love the story!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry haven't written much of this lately. Will be back soon. ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 19:54 · For: Chapter 8 - Slythy Fen.
This is really great writing. You showed just exactly how much Snape seemed to change and how Lily is growning up, I love the story!!

Author's Response: thank you ~(very late review response) ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 19:46 · For: Chapter 7 - Treacle Tart and Quidditch.
Awe! James and Lily out of school hanging out, how cute! :o) Love how much the Potters love her. She really does belong with them. I hope Hally will be ok!! I am so happy with this chapter. Sirius and Martha, now there is a cute couple! I love the characters you create and the way you make the already created ones interact with them. I really enjoy this. :o)

Author's Response: Thank you very nuch for the review. I'm glad you like Martha. She wasn't going to be that important, really, just someone that had a crush on James, but she demanded more story ... and a different man. ~Caroile~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 19:44 · For: Chapter 6- Godric's Hollow.
Love the Lily POV. It is nice how you change it up! I love them going to the Potters!! :o) Love the Writing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the different POV. I want to mix it up a bit. ~Carole~

Name: sarahfrey8 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 19:42 · For: Chapter 5 - An Intriguing Muggle Girl.
Oh Sirius, How i love him. And how you make him exactly how i imagined him. Love your writing!

Author's Response: I love Sirius, too. *sigh*

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