Aw, the ending's cute. I might have asked for a beta with a little more British experience, and if your beta did have it, good for them! I'm American, so I'm not sure, but other than that, awesome job.
aaaaawwww!!! thats so sweet!!! :)
omg!!! thats soooo sad considering its like the day they die! it was really good though!
Aww! That is so sweet... and sad, at the end. My heart clenched in the middle. You wrote it wonderfully. Great Job!
Why did Jo have to do this to us? It's so sad at the part where he says she'll have him forever and then we know he's about to go and die. And, the part about the little siblings. I wish they would've lived so that Teddy could've had that!
I think you have really got Tonks' feelings spot on! the way how she keeps worrying he left her again, its a really good idea!!
I liked this. You've really caught the whole feeding baby bit at the beginning. The joke to Remus about him not having breasts- spot on!
I thought he'd gone to Hogwarts already so I was pleasantly surprised when he came back and that was a lovely note he left her.
One minor quibble, I don't think they'd have had a meeting at The Burrow because it was unsafe- The Weasleys were all at Aunt Muriels according to Bill.
But that's a very tiny quibble. Overall I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Ooh, good quibble - I missed that one. Thanks!
Nice story. I think it was a bit repetitive - you seemed to keep re-visiting Tonks' worry, but overall it was good. I particularly liked this line:
"She caught a glimpse of the tips of her hair flashing every colour of the rainbow as her morphing abilities were carried along by the tidal wave of emotion that swept her."
I think that's a really beautiful idea, and it kept the idea of magic alive. Well done!