Reviewer: PattyPotter
Date: 08/11/10 0:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: After the War

Write more soon! Sooo good!

Author's Response: Thanks.... and sorry but the next chapter is taking longer than I intended...... I will submit it as soon as I can.....

Reviewer: scorpius_malfoy
Date: 04/08/10 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

This chapter was really well done. It did almost feel like tears were falling from my eyes as the names were called out.

Author's Response: I actually cried while writing it.... glad you liked it...

Reviewer: teddyvictoirefreak
Date: 01/17/10 19:47
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings

the first two chappie was kinda awkward but the second and third got a lot better you should keep on writing....

Author's Response: Thanks.... it is my first fanfic and it's taking a while to put together.... I'm working hard on the next chapter but I don't know when it will be finished..... keep reading....

Reviewer: Jen_Lugo
Date: 12/06/09 12:35
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings

Next Chapter Please! =]

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I finish the chapter.... sorry for the wait....

Reviewer: PotterGirl714
Date: 11/26/09 18:53
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings

I love it! Please add more soon!

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait.... but I'm trying to make a perfect chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 10/30/09 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings

well, that took a while for an update eh! good chapter overall, but i would like to throw out some constructive critisisum (ignor if you want) you seem to have a habit of resating the same ideas over and over from different peoples points of views, dont get me wrong i like the diff PoV's but, you dont need to say the same thing again, it just confuses the reader and takes up space where you could be adding more different things from the chapters. OR you could keep doing that, just make sure that the people really ARE thinking different things, or else the reader will just assume they are. also the overlap in time frames gets confusing. ANYWAY! keep up the good work, i hope the next chapter comes soon! HAPPY HALLOWEEN!

Author's Response: Yeah... sorry about the wait, but I'm at school so it's kind of difficult for me to start writing and then typing.... Thanks for the crtisisim, I will try to use you suggestions in the next chapter..... About the next chapter... It WILL take a while, 'cause I'm about to start exams, so it might be kind for difficult to sit in front of the computer, I hope it will be up on December..... Thanks for everything, glad you like it.....

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 10/30/09 19:07
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

AW! i always cry when i hear about Fred...sniff

Author's Response: me too.... sniff... sniff....

Reviewer: peacesmilepotter
Date: 10/30/09 18:41
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings

How sweet! i loved the ending! Harry and Ginny 4ever!

Author's Response: Thanks....

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/29/09 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings

Oh that was sooo sweet. This part of the story is always so sad. The shining light is Harry and Ginny getting back together. Thanks.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it....

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 08/31/09 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

All i can say is.. wow. AMAZING. i really got emotional in the 2nd chapter, and the way you wrote everything really,really,really sucked me in. you are a wonderful writer, please add more!!

Author's Response: Thanks.... it is great to know my words can have that effect..... wait for the next chapter, is even more emotional... don't hate me till you read the end of it..... I just posted it.... I guess it'll be on queue for a while... glad you liked it....

Reviewer: Marcella Josephine
Date: 08/25/09 10:01
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

plz write that was great just fantastic i loved it plz write more thanx

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.... I just posted the next chapter, it is on queue now.... keep you fingers crossed.....

Reviewer: the_aggrivator961
Date: 06/25/09 14:57
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

... Well, not exactly what I was expecting, but it was really good!

Author's Response: sorry I couldn't keep up with your expectations.... but I hope the next chapter will be able to...

Reviewer: Ginny4life
Date: 05/15/09 15:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

That was awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks..... I'm still working on the next chapter....

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 05/07/09 1:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

Great chapter; I'm really enjoying your story. I was just wondering why Snape was not included on the statue. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Well, the thing is that until now in the story nobody knows the true story about Snape, so I was planing to introduce the "Snape theme" later".... Anyway thanks, I'm still working on the next chapter, but I guess I'll upload it near June.....

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 05/05/09 20:13
Chapter: Chapter 2: In honour of the fallen

That was a fantastic idea for the memorial. I really loved that all those who lost someone was able to write their epitaph. Really good chapter. Keep on writing.

Author's Response: thanks, I'm working on the next chapter and the following ones are gonna be way more romantic..... glad you liked it...

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 05/05/09 19:55
Chapter: Chapter 1: After the War

I thought this was a good start to my favorite genre, AtB. It had all that I thought would be important to Harry, and Ginny,Ron and Hermione, they all needed their love to comfort them.

Author's Response: yeah... it is my favorite genre to..... the third chapter will be up soon, just waiting for my beta to correct it...

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 12/24/08 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: After the War

haha! I just noticed that i had reviewed under another name (Fred and Georgie) a while ago...forgot!

keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks..... I'm still working on tha final details of the next chapter: In honour of the fallen.... glad you like it... As soon as I'm finished and my beta give it back I'll publish it....

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 12/24/08 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: After the War

This is interesting...reminds me of my own story (too god to be fake) nice, though i thought Hermione wouldnt be as clueless, or was she just playing along? i cant wait to see where you take this.

Author's Response: Of course Hermione was just playing along!!!!! I'm not clueless about the characters... And actually I'm reading your story and I love it.... Some of my inspiration for the 3th chapter came out of it.... But obviusly I'm not copying a thing.... Anyway I like your story too!!!!!!!!!...........

Reviewer: sassysorceress95
Date: 10/28/08 16:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: After the War

It doesn't seem like enough. I mean, it starts out really good, but I wish you had written more...

Author's Response: Orçiginally this first chapter was longer.... but I decided to shorten it because the last part seemed like a totally different chapter... I'm still working on the second Chapter: In honor of the fallen... But I think it'll be updated till December...

Reviewer: Fred and Georgie
Date: 10/08/08 19:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: After the War

Its really good!
are you going to rite more???
Please make it romancy

Author's Response: I'm making it really romantic but as I started school again I really don't have time to write fast any more.....

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