Reviews For Immortally Yours
Reviewer: Tonks4life
Date: 09/03/09 21:27
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

omgosh this is so sad in the cutest way! I love it! I do believe however that it would fit with both My Immortal and My Last Breath by Evanescence.

Reviewer: LizzyT
Date: 12/13/08 9:50
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

It's an interesting concept, and a very sad story. I like the way you incorporated the lyrics - they actually seemed to work.

I just have one suggestion:

“Is it wrong for me to still miss you? Even though this is an anniversary of- of the battle?” I said, unwilling to acknowledge ( at least not any more than necessary) this anniversary for the other thing it was the anniversary of- Remus’s death.

That just sounded rather awkward to me. I think if you got rid of one of the anniversarys, everything would be great.

Because your story was awesome. =] I enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response: Thanks for the nicely in-depth review! It's so helpful to have people point specific sentences that need working on! I unfortunately can't spend much time on here anymore, but I'll get to changing that wording when possible. I see what you mean about it sounding awkward. :D I'm glad the song lyrics were properly incorporated! I love songfics, but every now and again you see one that kind of makes you just go o_O because the lyrics are a bit distracting... Thanks again for the lovely review! I apologise for my belated response to it. :) -Luna-

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 11/24/08 3:56
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

Oh wow. That was a beautiful one-shot. I could really hear the song playing in my head and imagine a heartbroken Tonks. Argh, now I don't know if I would have preferred them both dead or Tonks alive. Still heartbreaking either way....

Author's Response: Hia, and thanks for the lovely review! You know, I'm not entirely sure which I would have preferred either... You're right, it's heartbreaking either way. :( It sure made DH have a bigger impact on me, though! Also, I apologise for the lateness of my response to your review. I only just was able to have my interweb fixed so it wasn't blocking this website anymore. :P Again, thanks ever so much for the review! -Luna-

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 09/19/08 18:27
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

:) my favourite song has a great hp fan fic to match! yay!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm even gladder fellow fans of this awesome song are finding this fic enjoyable. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 09/19/08 15:59
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

OMG. This was amazing, and well written. It almost had me crying. I love it. Great Job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I love your Remus/Tonks fic, so it means a lot. :D I should really review yours now... I've just been reading it longer than I've been a member. :D Sorry I almost made you cry!

Reviewer: Hufflepuff at heart
Date: 09/17/08 9:56
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

Really well done. I had tears in my eyes at one point. You really had me believing that Tonks had survived the battle, and I just couldn't stop thinking of how unfair it all was! I'm off to listen to the song now so I can see how it fits into the story! I also loved the touch of humour you added to it, with the memory of their wedding - it had me smiling through my tears :)

A really bitter-sweet story, well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope you like the song too, when you hear it! It makes my day to hear you thought the AU premise was believable, as that was the part I was most worried about. I'm so glad you noticed that bit about the wedding- it makes me feel great when people point out little things like that which they enjoyed. Thanks again! -Luna-

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope you like the song too, when you hear it! It makes my day to hear you thought the AU premise was believable, as that was the part I was most worried about. I'm so glad you noticed that bit about the wedding- it makes me feel great when people point out little things like that which they enjoyed. Thanks again! -Luna-

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 09/16/08 21:00
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

That was amazing, Luna; you write so beautifully! I'm so glad it got accepted!

*huggles*
~Remora

Author's Response: *e-hugs* Thanks so, so much, Remora! It means a lot coming from someone who writes Remus/Tonks as well as you do. -Luna-

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 09/16/08 18:12
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

This was such a wonderful representation of one of my favorite songs. The lyrics fit so well with the situation, which doesn't happen much in songfics. A wonderful AU in general!

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! Making sure I didn't disappoint fellow fans of the song was one of my main goals, so I'm thrilled you think it fits well. Also, I am so glad you think it was a good AU. It was definitely something different for me to write, in that sense. Thanks again! -Luna-

Reviewer: FireboltCrasher
Date: 09/16/08 18:00
Chapter: Immortally Yours: One Shot

I really like that song, so I just had to read this. It was really sad, but I liked it. You're a great writer.

Author's Response: Yay! My first review! *e-hugs* I'm so glad you liked it! It is a really lovely song, isn't it? Thanks so much! -Luna-

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