Thank you very much!
Aww! This was a nice piece, the first R/Hr I've actually read.... My favourite lines were He doesn't know, but when he looks away,
She stares at him and smiles so brightly. Nice job :)
Oh! How sweet!
My favourite words from this poem is "blossoming." It's such a great word to use for love, becuase love really does blossom.
I know exactly what you mean when you say writing sonnets are hard. I wrote one about love in the Harry Potter series and spent three days toiling with it after it was done before sending it off for beta'ing. Then I got it back with edits and suggestions all over the place.
I'm uber happy to be the first to review. I hope more people follow suit.
Author's Response: Thanks, that means a lot to me!