clever title...
I'm really interested to see where you take this; you seem to have a really good understanding of the characters' personalities and how they interact with each other.
Author's Response: Yay! You noticed the title! I racked my brains for ages thinking of one, and then it came to me! Then I had to check that there really WAS a war called the Seven Years' War, and I hadn't just made it up! Gosh, you guys have all given me such wonderful feedback that I really hope the rest of the story is up to scratch! Ah well, there's only one way for me to find out really...! Thanks for the wonderful review, Nymphea!
That was cute! Now I'm anxious to see how James will screw things up. =]
Your story has a lot of potential. Updata soon!
Author's Response: Oh, who says it's James who will mess it up? (Wait, scrap that, it probably will be him...!)
Aw! They're portrayed so perfectly!
When will James mess it all up??
Update soon!
Author's Response: Perfectly? Aw, you've got me blushing! I hope the rest of the story lives up to your expectations now! Thanks very much for the kind review.
I actually don't read many James/Lily fics but this one was brilliant. Your characterization was perfect...especially Slughorn, he was great. Can't wait for an update. :D
Author's Response: Well I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this one! Slughorn is great fun, isn't he? :) Chapter two will be submitted very soon now!
I really enjoyed the first chapter. I read a lot of the James/Lily fics, but this one is probably one of the best I've read so far. I'm really glad Slughorn was in it... he's so hilarious! Please update as soon as possible!
Author's Response: Aw shucks, I feel so honoured to hear that! Slughorn was so much fun to write, I'm thinking of ways to have him pop in again now! Thanks for reviewing!
Aww, I can just picture them perfectly! This is definitely going to my favorites- I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope it's as good as this one.
Author's Response: Oh, yay! Thank you so much, I can't tell you how much I love being favourited! :) "Second Year" should be going in the queue very soon now!
