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Reviews For Drool

Name: Pendraegona (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 17:34 · For: Chapter 1
Ha! This was a riot.

Biased as I am against third person, this story was really funny, cute, and loaded with foreshadowing. You probably could have cut the earlier bit about corrupting Harry, unless the gentlemanly talk was the corruption, because that just leaves us wondering what he would have done.

I think you only did it in one place, about halfway through--lady's man, instead of ladies' man.

Oh, and the Madame Puddifoot's line was a gem. Much enjoyed it. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and the corrections, as well as taking the time to review!

Name: sam_1034_lily (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 13:16 · For: Chapter 1
cute i luved it a lot

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Name: HermioneGrangerfan (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 9:39 · For: Chapter 1
lol brilliant :D

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for taking the time to write up a review!

Name: ginnyrulz13 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 23:34 · For: Chapter 1
lol! that was genius! funny, well written, and it had some very good, much needed, advice.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments and reading my story, as well as reviewing!

Name: Troll_In_The_Dungeon (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 19:36 · For: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness, that is hilarious! I love how so many things are like "too bad he didn't listen.." and then how he's like "she must be redheaded"

Author's Response: I love giving little hints. Sirius always struck me as one of those characters that wasn't talked about enough. Anywho, thanks for the review!

Name: Calico (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 15:03 · For: Chapter 1
I love the "little Progslet"! I could definitely see Sirius giving Harry a long lecture about relationships just for the fun of it. This was a really cute, happy story to read, even though I know how it ends.

Author's Response: :] Thanks for the review!

Name: phoenix_fille (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 19:53 · For: Chapter 1
Ah, lovely baby drool. Humerous story too. So sad, and yet happy, how everything ends up.

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