Reviews For Moonlight
Reviewer: k4c
Date: 05/12/09 11:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Thats quite a good story, I like your descriptions :).
And I'm guessing Ginny has died, and had come back a shadow of her former self? Like in DH when a person uses the Resurrection Stone?
A job well done, but I want to know more hehe :)

Reviewer: omega7
Date: 09/19/08 1:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

For your first fic. it was absolutly fantastic, I loved every bit of it and I hope you write some more in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Love when you guys review!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 09/15/08 19:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww. That was so sad, but sweet at the same time. I don't suppose Harry would technically be able to touch/hold Ginny if she were really a ghost, but overlooking that, I really enjoyed this story. It was short and simple, but that just made it stronger. Though a part of me was curious to know how Ginny ended up dead, I'm glad you didn't tell us, it would've ruined the ambiguity of it all . . . I'm just babbling now. Anyway, thanks for a nice read, and good work. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was debating if I should put how she died in, but it just didn't fit. I glad it worked okay. Thanks again!

Reviewer: MissJewell
Date: 09/07/08 13:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, my goodness. That was breathtaking. It's so sad, and so honest and clear. It's beautiful.

I suppose my only complaint is the overrepetition of the word "skeletal", which jolted me a little bit.

Overall, though, your story is absolutely amazing. I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I used 'skeletal' a lot to describe her because that's how I imagined her -- very bony, pale, like a skeleton.

Reviewer: evans_209
Date: 09/04/08 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like this alot, but I am confussed. Are they both ghosts? I don't understand that part. But very good story :D

Author's Response: Ginny is a sort of ghost/vampire -- Harry is still human. Though if he still is by the end is up to the reader. :) Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Joslyn617
Date: 08/31/08 23:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my, I just looked at your screenname and realized you most likely already read Wicked Lovely. I feel stupid now :D

Author's Response: Don't feel stupid. I picked my screenname because I liked the combo of words.

Reviewer: Joslyn617
Date: 08/31/08 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well, i liked it :D i can say that i'm not sure how this story is going to unfold, but i've tried the whole 'ghost' thing before, and i think it's fun, albeit very difficult to write. You did a splendid job writing it :) The whole warmth-cold in spite of love thing reminded me of that book Wicked Lovely, by Marissa Mar which is a really amazing read. Anyway, my review was most likely pointless to you, seeing as it contained no sort of constructive criticism or anything, but i felt i'd tell you that i really liked it and look forward to seeing where it goes, because i know i appreciate compliments on my writing, which is something i'm terribly passionate about. OH, but i'm very interested in seeing how Ginny died, if that helps you further the plot at all, although i'm sure you already covered that in later chapters XD well, thanks for the good read. you're going on my favorites :)

Hah, this is the longest review i've ever left XD

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Glad you liked it. I'm actually planning to have this be just a one-shot, so all I have on Ginny's death is that she died in The Last Battle (hence the Book 7 Disregarded warning).

I have read Wicked Lovely, though after I already compleated this (which was about a year ago). Without even trying the became similar -- go figure!

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