I thought this was a cute one shot. Although I wish there was a little more explanation about what happened with lily and james previously. I was a bit confused... but all the same, I liked the story!
AWW THATS BEAUTIFUL POOR HESTIA SHE STOOD NO CHANCE
You've got some good ideas here--but I am surprised at how casually both Hestia and James treat their relationship.
I think you should change the rating on this--1st-2nd years implies that 11 and 12 year olds could read this, and I think it contains some inappropriate material. Sorry if that sounds rude, and this is your first review and all...I just thought the rating should be higher.
Author's Response: Thank you! As you can tell I'm new to this, sorry!