Okay, so you didn't demonstrait a great knowledge of HP, but you did of the nutcracker. Plus, it was sweet. YAY HARRY AND LUNA!!!
The story was sweet, though a little OOC, it was really great. Nice job!
great story, it was sorta strange, but a beautiful one-shot
Strangely beautiful and very descriptive, an excellent one shot
There is one word to describe the beauty of this story -- just one. It's a word I've learned to use in those situations when you encounter something so beautiful, so heart-wrenching and appealing to the soul that most words utterly fail you -- you cannot describe the events without resorting to tears and a picturesque language of emotion. It's a word that holds great meaning to me. That word is "superb" -- whether it's technically correct or not by its definition, I hardly know. Definitions can not touch this story. ...Your story is superb, for the fact that it reached so far into my soul that mere language couldn't reach it anymore.
I loved it... Very simalar to the Nutcracker.. I would know, i've been in the Nutcracker ballette in my hometown sence I was 4...