Reviews For Alternate Ending
Reviewer: Ye_Merry_Hippogriffs
Date: 07/27/11 1:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm speechless. An alternate ending indeed! This story is haunting and chilling, and while I hate the thought of something like this being canon, I really enjoyed it. It would have been great to see some of it from Harry's POV, however.

Reviewer: bekki-unknown
Date: 07/14/10 9:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

What a chilling story! It was a clever twist, but would Ron and Hermione really kiss in the middle of the battle?

Author's Response: They probably wouldn't ... again, lol. They did kiss outside the room of requirement in DH. But that's what fan fiction's for, isn't it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sophiewalpole
Date: 11/17/09 10:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like it. I have been looking for something a bit darker, and yes I think I have found it. Interesting story, now I will read the rest of your work. Once again, really good. have a good Christmas xx

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words, it means a lot! If you read The Torment Bred in the Race, please continue telling me what you think, as it is the sequel to this story. I've slowly been working on getting that one updated more frequently. Happy Christmas to you, too!

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 06/25/09 13:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was very good...and also very, very depressing. Alternate ending indeed.

Reviewer: azngurlwidhighlights
Date: 04/02/09 23:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

ok i know i'm being immature but seriously what the hell? who the hell would want so many bad things to happen or for harry to be like taken over for the rest of his life! i mean seriously the writing is awesome and all, but i hate your inspiration!

Author's Response: I completely agree with you. I would never want those things to happen, it would be absolutely horrible! This story was merely a 'what if', something that would never happen, but just grabbed hold of me until I wrote it. You may be happy to know, however, that there is a WIP chaptered sequel in the making, taking place years later and from the POV of an OC. I don't know how long it'll take to complete, or if it'll ever get posted, but it's my way of putting to rights what I destroyed in Alternate Ending. I'm not at all surprised or sorry about your response, and thank you for taking the time to leave a review.

Reviewer: ScarheadLovesFerret
Date: 12/24/08 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

I was looking for an angsty fanfic...and I got it. This was amazing...better even, than J.K. Rowlings'. At least yours didn't have an epilouge that sucked.:D This was great.:)

Reviewer: Adeyla
Date: 11/16/08 1:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, this was strange - but good! i think it would have done better in the AU category with Dark/Angsty warnings, but i really liked it.

Reviewer: ecic
Date: 10/14/08 0:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

yours makes more since than jk's

Reviewer: ecic
Date: 10/14/08 0:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

yours makes more since than jk's

Reviewer: evans_209
Date: 09/06/08 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Interesting story. I don't know what made you think of such a story, but I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Flavius
Date: 09/04/08 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

I just want to say that I enjoyed your story very much, it was great.
You had a very interesting idea, it's a pity you only wrote a oneshot, it would have been perfect as a chaptered fic.

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