Reviews For As A Statue
Reviewer: Harry_Potter4life
Date: 08/28/09 17:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

OMG!!!! It's beautiful! The images are so clear to me. It's amazing!

Reviewer: HermionesTwin_FromOz
Date: 09/14/08 3:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

:O Phia, my dear! I bow down to your poetry prowess! I love this. A lot. It's very sad, and dark, and the language you've used simply blows me away. It's a wonderful poem! I really need to check your author page more often. o.o


Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 09/01/08 15:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ah, I remember this. =) I love this poem, Phia, it's honestly amazing. I have no critiques, just...awe, really. *grins* I love the beginning, as it just sets the tone for the entire piece, and I love how it ties in with the ending - Who, Salazar, who, can mend Rowena's shattered heart? You have an amazing way with words, as I've told you. x_x

I love the way you describe things - the lantern glowing, resolute and brave, the way she didn't cry nor 'sully deathly perfect skin' (that line is aMAzing, really), and the screams shuddering through her...this is one of the best dark poems I've read in a long while. *favorites* =)


Author's Response:

Aww thanks Kate! I do love you... so kinda of you to leave me all these beautiful reviews. *blushes* Thanks so much! Based entirely on your kindness, I've decided to post some more dark poetry on my account. Thankyou!

xoxox Phia 

Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 09/01/08 14:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great poem! I really loved the imagery and the comparison to Rapunzel. I especially loved the line about her screams being trapped inside. You seemed to be missing a syllable here and there, so you might want to watch that, but other than that, it was a very good poem! Well done!

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks Mapoi! :D You know, you're the first one to ever have told me you like the Rapunzel comparison. Most people think it's a bit dodgy. So I'm glad for your support!

Yes, I do have that problem with rhythm. Sigh. I'm working on it... thanks for the helpful review!


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