Reviews For The Boy Can Charm
Reviewer: Bookaddict
Date: 04/17/09 18:51
Chapter: Chapter 2. A New Beginning

I want to read more so update sooner than soon.

Reviewer: ginnypotter_89
Date: 02/20/09 23:01
Chapter: Chapter 1. What the...

yeah. you're really lucky. i've never had a fic excepted. :(

Reviewer: ginnypotter_89
Date: 12/26/08 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 2. A New Beginning

yes this box aint so lonely anymore. yeah but is there another chapter coming up? the story is really good and i want to hear if james wins over lily.

Author's Response: yes i've written a lot of the story, only i was tremendously busy and i never got to posting it....although I'l probably get busier this year, I'll try to post asap

Reviewer: Blubber
Date: 10/17/08 20:32
Chapter: Chapter 2. A New Beginning

hey cool story so far! I hate the plot where 'james-has-changed-and-lily-suddenly-realizes-her-feelings' sort of thing. it seems more natural the way you write. keep it up! i hope theres more chapters!

Author's Response: thanks:) and of course, there's more chapters... and more stories too!!

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 10/16/08 4:47
Chapter: Chapter 2. A New Beginning

very interesting. i'm enjoying this story. please write more soon :D

Author's Response: thanks^^ I will

Reviewer: Treacle_Heart
Date: 10/10/08 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 2. A New Beginning

This is turning out to be quite lovely, you know. :)
I have a quick nitpick though.
...until she noticed an arm stretched out towards me from the doorway
If it's not from Lily's POV, I don't think it would be 'me', it would've been 'her'. Also, you seem to have forgotten a period at the end of that sentence.
Keep up the great work!

-- Julia

Author's Response: oops, yes you're right. You see, I had originally planned for that chapter to be in Lily's P.O.V. I must have missed it while makig modifications. Will try to not let that happen again.

Reviewer: KittyCatLover
Date: 10/09/08 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 1. What the...

That was fun! I want to read more! I think you spelled a few things wrong, but that's all I could see at a glance. Poor Lily, though. :( Upda-oh wait! There's another chapter! Yippie! Sorry, I'm still catching on. :)

Author's Response: Sadly, spelling was and still isn't my strongest point. I'm glad you liked the story^^

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 10/07/08 19:52
Chapter: Chapter 2. A New Beginning

Your story has a great beginning. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you:)

Reviewer: Treacle_Heart
Date: 08/22/08 7:54
Chapter: Chapter 1. What the...

I thought that it was really cute!
It sounds like a good plot , and I can't wait to read more! :)

--Julia

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'll write more, and quickly:) Thanks for your support

Reviewer: cassie123
Date: 08/22/08 1:57
Chapter: Chapter 1. What the...

Hooray! I'm so pleased this got validated, after all the hard work. Congratulations, dear. Looking forward to the next chapters :) ~ Cassie.

Author's Response: Thanks, Cassie. Of course, this story wouldn't be here without your help. So I thank you for that too^^

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