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Reviews For Justify

Name: Theloonyhermione (Signed) · Date: 07/15/12 15:14 · For: Justify
This was really good! I think I'm going to read more of your stories now........ :D

Name: Nymphea (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 22:28 · For: Justify
oh, this was beautiful! especially the last line.
Suddenly, involuntarily, I can feel tears forming, and I wish the damn rain would hurry up and fall so I could pretend I’m not crying for him. Or maybe I’m not crying for him at all. Maybe I’m crying for myself, for what I’ve lost since I was that little girl.
What a perfect description! and it's so true, so real.
thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)

Name: Calico (Signed) · Date: 08/29/08 14:37 · For: Justify
This was powerful and sad, and so well written. I like the way you connected the weather with the war, and placed Lily in a park to connect her to her past. I also like how at the end you let the reader know that Lily missed Sev, but didn't even mention his name. Really great fic!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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