Reviews For Moon Spell
Reviewer: brandinm05
Date: 01/02/10 1:11
Chapter: Blue Smoke

More please!! I'm fully intrigued :)

Author's Response: More coming. Had to take a hiatus but I'm going to try and complete this story.

Reviewer: Duchess_Of_Arcadia
Date: 06/04/09 7:49
Chapter: Blue Smoke

I liked it, a good little interlude, I'm dubious about these blokes though, they could be bbbaaaaaaaaaad men lol
keep up the good work
xx

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 05/26/09 16:50
Chapter: Blue Smoke

I am loving this story! I love A Child's Gift. I can't wait for an update...this is being added to my favorites :)

Author's Response: Thankyou.

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 04/07/09 13:36
Chapter: Blue Smoke

its been a while since u update the previous chapter.... Im glad that its finally here... actually, i had been waiting for this chapter for a while... and u didnt dissappoint me with this chapter either, in fact i love this chapter!!! Its the best so far! what i like the most abt this chapters are that eventhough they r updated late but its long in length...this chapter was well written!! Hope in future we will get to know more abt Damien... Cant wait for the next chapter to b updated!!!! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you and hopefully you won't have to wait so long next time.

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 04/07/09 12:49
Chapter: Master

i love this story...:P ... i like this chapter too... i especially love the part where Draco n Harry talks like normal friends... thats not an everyday thing to see...:P

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Rome
Date: 01/31/09 10:11
Chapter: A Myth Worth Mentioning

Ugh. I can't wait anymore.
Have you abandoned this?

Author's Response: No, sorry. Very busy lately. Next chap is waiting to be approved and the following chap is with my beta.

Reviewer: hlf_insn_insmnc
Date: 11/20/08 19:11
Chapter: A Myth Worth Mentioning

okay so i havent even started reading this yet but i just read the other story about draco and hermione and abby and i loved it! so i have high expectations for this story! :D

Author's Response: Hoped you enjoyed whats there is.

Reviewer: Duchess_Of_Arcadia
Date: 10/26/08 20:00
Chapter: Master

I really like it, but I wanna know what's happened nooooow:P

Author's Response: I know and I am truly sorry. I've been really busy lately, but I plan on picking things back up soon.

Reviewer: Rome
Date: 09/28/08 10:12
Chapter: Master

Ahhh ... once again an amazing chapter.
You've left so many unanswered questions, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I'm dying to find out who was with Abby.
The building Konk was in is Hogwarts, right?
Ahh ... who's house was Konks' 'Master' referring to? Draco's?
Or it could be someone else's, since he mention 'the other'. But he could be talking about Aria.
So many questions, yet so little information. xDD
I can't believe it'll be at least another 2 weeks until I'll be able to read the next chapter.

Ohwells, that's life. =P

/.Rome

Author's Response: Thank you so very much. It's not Hogwarts, sorry, but that much I can reveal. How can it be when I mention that Abby's siblings are attending the school. The rest, well those two weeks are going to be torture, sorry. Again, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Adeyla
Date: 09/12/08 0:57
Chapter: Choices

i read the first abby book, a childs gift, religiously, and think u r a gr8 writer! u should get something published! i kant wait to here mor bwt abby!!!!!

Author's Response: Well, hopefully I have something up soon. I've had computer troubles so please be patient. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Rome
Date: 09/06/08 19:13
Chapter: Choices

Oh, I didn't mean slow in a bad way. In fact, I actually prefer slower stories, since they give you more time to think.
Plus it gives the authors a chance to build up the tension, only for it to end up being something useless; and then start building it up again! xDD
&I'll make sure that not another living soul will here that Draco seemed lost, because you know; word travels fast around these parts of the ... universe? lol.
Oh, I also like how Aria will be going with Abby; it'll be a great setup for some surprises, I think. :P

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I didn't mean to imply that you didn't like the slow build up, though there are a few out there that hate that in a story. I love it because like you said, it gives you more time to think about the possible directions something could be going. Thanks.

Reviewer: Rome
Date: 09/03/08 18:02
Chapter: Choices

Hey again! Jus wanna say that I loved this chapter! It goes into depth, and sometimes you need to slow things down, to speed things up, right? Okay, maybe not right, since it hardly made sense. xDD

Anyway, I'm glad to see that most of the annoying errors have gone in this chapter, it really makes it more enjoyable to read for me, since I feel as if I'm attracted to them. :P

Right, onto my favourite parts of teh chapter:
- I just bet that Abby couldn't resist telling Draco more about Moon Spell.
- When Draco said “The what of the what?” made me laugh. He sounded so lost. xD
- It's great to see that Harry has opened a new business, it's something to keep him occupied! =D
- That stranger is givin me the heebie-jeebies (or however the hell you spell it. xDD) I noticed that you referred to him as 'the stranger' and not 'a stranger'; I assume it's because he had that 'heart stopping' effect on Abby, & has a bigger role further on in teh story?

Looking forward to reading more,
Rome.

P.S. Bleh, MNFF logged me out cuz I took too long writing this review. xDD

Author's Response: Sorry that you got locked out. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. The stranger has a role to play but I refuse to say how big or little since it will soon be revealed. Draco lost - hmm? Don't ever let him hear you say so, lol. Hope you continue to enjoy the story as it goes along. I'm afraid that this one might turn out to be much longer then Hermione and Draco's tale, but I have learned that not every story has to be a race to the end. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Rome
Date: 08/27/08 9:20
Chapter: A Myth Worth Mentioning

Whoa, that's one hell of a long review. xDD
One more thing I forgot to mention ...
*laughs as she rolls her eyes, wondering what else I have to say. xDD*
I have this feeling that one of the three men you mentioned in the summary, either the one who wants her to succeed, or the one who wants it to all end; is the one that saved Hermione? Just a wild guess ... xDD

Author's Response: Hmm, maybe, can't say for sure. I mean, stories change, things happen and what you thought was going to come never does. So I guess we'll just have to see what happens as the story progresses. (I did luagh)

Reviewer: Rome
Date: 08/27/08 9:18
Chapter: A Myth Worth Mentioning

Awesome, awesome chapter!

I love the way you go into depth about the stories. The summary seems really interesting, & I can't wait for more!

I also loved the way you introduced Abby in this chapter, and the way Draco tried questioning her while she was telling that story, only to stop because of the looks she gave him! xDD

There were some errors, such as you typing 'her' instead of 'here'; 'to' instead of 'too'; 'you' instead of 'your'; and 'your' instead of 'you're'. There was also a place where you inserted a question mark, instead of a full-stop.

I know that was nitpicking, but I honestly can't help it! Lol. xDD

I can't wait to read the following chapters, and who exactly is after Abby!

Oh& thanks for writing such awesome stories! =D

P.S. It's amazing that Draco still refers to Abby as Abigail. Some things just won't change, eh? :P

Author's Response: I'll try bringing those awful irritating mistakes down some in the next chapters ;). I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter and yes, some things never change. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 08/26/08 7:48
Chapter: A Myth Worth Mentioning

I was so excited when I read the summary for this!! I really like "a Child's Gift", and this chapter brings in back that world and sets up an interesting background for Abby's journey. I like that she is involved in work that is a nice mix of her parents:searching for this like her father but researching things like her mother. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope you continue to enjoy Abby's story as much as I'm enjoying writing it.

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