Reviews For Words
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 08/27/08 15:35
Chapter: Words

Victoria, I found this when I noticed the name 'Sirius Blac'. haha so... I like how this starts and ends in the same place, I like how finally someone wrote about how Walburga was nice until Sirius became a Gryffindor, and I liked the emotion in this, Excellent job, and it's going on my favorites. {BeccA}

Author's Response: Haha. Well, thanks for all the feedback...and WOA! I GET TO GO ON YOUR FAVORITES?? Wow...Thanks soo much! --Victoria

Reviewer: inspirations
Date: 08/27/08 13:59
Chapter: Words

I admit it - I never read poetry, but tonight I just got the urge, and I am so glad I picked yours. I loved it. It rhymed and made sense ... and excellent. Maybe I should have a go at poems. Though like I said at the beginning, I much prefer reading a story. Umm ... it's rare you read a poem so good - it's really well written, and the phrases you put together were great! I hope to see more fanfic from you. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I never read poetry either...I'm really flattered, seeing as this is my first try at fanfiction. I didn't expect people to actually like it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: rayasunshine
Date: 08/27/08 12:33
Chapter: Words

I loved it, I can totally relate to Sirius now! “Good night, and I love you,” you whispered into my ear,
Gentle hands tucking my bed sheets close.
Your words would erase all my worries and fears,
Of boggarts, monsters and ghosts." That was my favorite part, please add some more Sirius related stuff soon!

Author's Response: *squee!* People liked it! I'm so happy to here this, and I'll be sure to get to work on some Sirius stuff pretty soon! :) Thanks again. --Victoria

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