Reviews For Decisions
Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 08/01/09 9:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is an amazing poem. It gave me chills and actually brought a tear to my eye. I feel so bad for Andromeda, losing almost her whole family. I can't even think of any concrit for this; the meter was good, the rhyming perfect. And those last two lines were amazing, brining the poem to a very nice close. I loved this poem and hope to read more of your poetry.
*clicks add to favorites button*
Keep writing! :)
~Vivian

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) Very high praise and much appreciated. Poetry is my favorite category to write (if you can't tell!) Tonks and Remus are my favorite ship, too, so you find them a lot, too.

Reviewer: liquid_silver
Date: 09/06/08 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is great! I think this poem shows perfectly how much was lost in the final battle. And it affected me in particular, because Tonks was one of my favorites. Well done!

Author's Response: Tonks and Remus are two of my favorite characters. :) I was just trying to write about her decisions...what would pull at her and why she might have left her infant son. :) Thanks for the complements. I had fun writing this poem!

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 08/29/08 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

i luved it a lot it was ver sad last 2 lines r da best

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. :) It was sad, but so was the entire concept. Just part of the story I guess.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/27/08 20:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is another wonderful example of your gift with Poetry. I really enjoyed reading this and I hope that many other people will too! Cyns

Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun writing this poem. Been wanting to write more poetry then I have been...and the new Poetry Anyone rules makes me have to... :)

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