Reviews For Heartbeats
Reviewer: nayin
Date: 10/14/11 11:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely

Reviewer: Liet Dumbledore
Date: 08/07/11 6:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very romantic.

Reviewer: voltorb6
Date: 09/02/10 19:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice!! Very intense

Reviewer: hoyahippie5
Date: 12/13/09 14:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

great

Reviewer: TheV94
Date: 10/25/09 13:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

it was like i was there with them-experiencing what they were. u could be the next JK! happy reading and keep on keeping on!
Love always
The V94

Reviewer: mixx
Date: 07/23/09 22:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

:D awwwww.... :)

Reviewer: lementations
Date: 07/08/09 17:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was awesome! amazing. if only there were more stories like that. :)

Reviewer: NoMinistryIdiot
Date: 06/30/09 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great, it might have been better that way in the books... relativaly.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 05/10/09 23:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked the last little bit...

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 05/08/09 18:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

I don't normally read canon fics but this one was awesome! You write a lot like I do (which is a compliment, don't worry) and maybe better.

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 05/08/09 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

I don't normally read canon fics but this one was awesome! You write a lot like I do (which is a compliment, don't worry) and maybe better.

Reviewer: redhairedflame
Date: 02/15/09 2:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it :) Especially "He sees her." Awwwww :)
Do more!

Reviewer: kenola
Date: 09/01/08 17:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was SOOO good and cutee!
rlly i loved it.. make more just lik it
please :]]] kaythxoxobye* -kenola

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 08/29/08 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

(Sherri): You're very welcome!

(Amy): Yep, anytime.

~"Amy" Amelia and Sherri ;-)

Reviewer: Loyd1957
Date: 08/29/08 12:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved this. It was done so well. Full of light heartedness and love. Loved the line from Harry, that he notices her.

Reviewer: altanna
Date: 08/28/08 13:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was absolute bliss. :-)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 08/27/08 16:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

(Sherri): Ooh, that was pretty! Amy, the usual first reviewer, has contracted the flu, and since I found out a few minutes ago, she's not going near the computer. So her response:

"Muy bien! That was amazing, fantastic, and downright awesome! Better than chicken soup, which french frie over here is trying to force down my throat."

And my respones to that: "Whatever, taco, you're just mad because the french-speaking chick actually GOT her vacination!"

~"Amy" Amelia and Sherri ;-)

Author's Response: Haha wow, thank you, both of you! =]

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl163
Date: 08/25/08 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

ah this i really cute i love it great job!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That was my intention. =]

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