Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 09/13/09 5:24
Chapter: Chapter 12 The Start of a New Beginning

Hmm, I like this story, and having a plot twist centered around a random Quibbler article from OotP is a nice touch.

My only whiny little concern is that I would like to have seen Harry extend a hand of friendship to the closest thing he has to a sister in Grace, but all in all, I really enjoyed the story and the underlying plot. The story line was actually pretty informative and laden with information for only a 12 chapter work, which is always a plus in my book.

Author's Response: Thank you, for taking the time out to write me such kind words. Yes, I agree. The last seen should have included one last handshake between Harry and Grace.

Reviewer: azngurlwidhighlights
Date: 04/08/09 19:08
Chapter: Chapter 12 The Start of a New Beginning

Well that was retarded..what kind of ending is that!!! I thought this was supposed to be dark and angsty!!!! You could have at least put Harry into more danger!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I was planning on continuing his quest to fight the creatures that have been attacking him. My goal, until life interrupted me, was to create a whole new saga wtih Harry, Ron, Hermione and the other Aurors, fighting off the groups that branched off from the Death Eaters. Hopefully, one day, I'll still get my chance. Wish me luck.

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/29/08 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 12 The Start of a New Beginning

Good story. I really enjoyed reading it. Didn't think Grace was Sirus's daughter. That was a shock!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As far as Grace's true ID, don't you just love surprises. Take care and have a wonderful new year.

Reviewer: chimom
Date: 12/26/08 14:58
Chapter: Chapter 11 A Carefully Guarded Secret

Thanks for a wonderful story.

Author's Response: Thank you, for taking the time to leave a review. It means everything to the authors. I think it's okay to speak for all authors on this site. Welcome to Mugglenet, BTW. I saw your memebership date. I'm flattered that I'm your first reviewee. Have a wonderful holiday and stay tuned. There's one more chapter to go.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 12/20/08 12:38
Chapter: Chapter 10 The Rogue Bludgers Incident

when are chapter 11 and 12 going to be submitted? Have you written them yet? I can't wait. So, Dori claims that Grace is spying on Potter to protect him, but is that really true? I have a hunch that it's a lie.

Author's Response: I just submitted eleven. Twelve is written. As soon as eleven is posted, I will submit twelve. Hang in there. It should only be another week longer to find out the Marauder's big secret. Many things will be revealed in eleven, and twelve will tell you what happens to everyone immediately after Hogwarts. Hope your holidays are treating you well. Thank you, for following my story. The last time I checked the reader count it said something like 673. That can't all be you, can it? :-)

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 12/17/08 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 9 Forensic Lessons, Bridget, and Pygmy Puffs

oh, you're scaring me already, and chapter 10 hasn't come yet. There's more to the Stubbardmans than just their ulterior motives? I can't wait, I'm so full of suspense.

Author's Response: Let me know what you think about eleven.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 12/17/08 13:30
Chapter: Chapter 9 Forensic Lessons, Bridget, and Pygmy Puffs

just two chapters left, and the story's over? I thought it was going to be longer but okay. I enjoyed reading it. Will we find out about ulterior motives of the Stubbardmans?

Author's Response: There's a total of three: Chapters 10, 11, and 12. I just uploaded chapter 10 yesterday. As far as your question goes, there's only one way to find out. You won't be disappointed. What you do find out about the Stubbardmans will shock you more than their ulterior motives

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 12/16/08 11:59
Chapter: Chapter 1The Ceremony

This story has not received many reviews, so I'm going to give one:

My god, that Grace is so suspicious--what is the big plan of her spying on Harry? Are Artistotle and Brigit in it as well? "Keep my eye on the prize"--I'm still convinced there is something wrong with the Stubbardmans. What if they are actually involved in Harry's assassination attempts?

I have so many questions. Please update soon. How many chapters have you written up, not counting the ones already posted? Have you written chapter 10 yet?

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I've just uploaded chapter ten. It's in the queue waiting as we speak. There are two more chapters left. The eleventh chapter will reveal something very important. Don't worry, you won't have to wait long. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Sometimes I wonder if anyone is enjoying it. Have a great holiday. Deanaz

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 09/15/08 0:06
Chapter: Chapter 4 A Close Call

*gasps* someone's dead? Who is it? Is it Luna? Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for leaving a review. I love your penname. Hang on tight. I have the story completed. I only need to upload the chapters. In the meantime, I can tell you this: the real mystery isn't who was murdered or even who did the killing. Once revealed, though, it will cause jaws to drop.

Reviewer: ryan0935
Date: 08/25/08 18:00
Chapter: Chapter 1The Ceremony

ok a good story, however having a BSc in english i can proudly say that you have a great tallent!!be sure to finish this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for this review. ALthough, I must say, I can't take all the credit; I was blessed to have wonderful beta readers. Yes, I will try to get the next chapter uploaded ASAP.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 08/24/08 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 1The Ceremony

That was interesting. Is it finished, though. Because I think it says it's finished but it seems to short to be finished... it's very good though. I hope, if it is finished, there's a companion fic, and if it's not that it's updated quickly. Great job, Lena! {BeccA}

Author's Response: Hello!! Thank you for taking the time to leave me such an encouraging review. I'm sorry about the confusion. When I said that the story was completed, I meant that the WHOLE story is completed, beta read, corrected etc on ALL ELEVEN chapters. So, stay tuned. I will try as hard as I can to get chapter 2 uploaded. I must say, I can't take all the credit for this story. I was blessed to have three wonderful beta readers work on it. If you want a great beta reader, may I recommend Thegirllikeme, and or Shev. BTW I adore your penname. I'm a huge Beatle fan!

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