Reviews For Envy and Fondness
Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 04/10/09 18:27
Chapter: Envy and Fondness

So funny, and sort of cute in a way. Why is it that teasing between children is so much funnier when it's not happening to you. I know James was an evil little brat, but I still could help but find him funny. Maybe that was what made him so popular in his school days.

I also loved the job you did of portraying James' parents. He really does seem like the little darling of their lives the way you have them written.

Author's Response: lol And thanks for the review, Molly. *hugs*

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 08/24/08 20:26
Chapter: Envy and Fondness

Oh, I love your writing so much! This story starts out so sweet with just Lily and Severus, I really think that they would have just hung out like that. And then when James showed up, well, the reactions were just perfect. Thanks so much for another great fic!


Author's Response: Thank you. Especially for your first comment. *squishes* I love getting your reviews.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 08/24/08 19:23
Chapter: Envy and Fondness

That was really good! I would have liked it to be a bit longer, but it was still great! {BeccA}

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. My beta suggested some ideas of how to make a chaptered fic out of it. Maybe, one day... Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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