Reviews For Envy and Fondness
Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 04/10/09 18:27
Chapter: Envy and Fondness

So funny, and sort of cute in a way. Why is it that teasing between children is so much funnier when it's not happening to you. I know James was an evil little brat, but I still could help but find him funny. Maybe that was what made him so popular in his school days.

I also loved the job you did of portraying James' parents. He really does seem like the little darling of their lives the way you have them written.

Author's Response: lol And thanks for the review, Molly. *hugs*

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 08/24/08 20:26
Chapter: Envy and Fondness

Oh, I love your writing so much! This story starts out so sweet with just Lily and Severus, I really think that they would have just hung out like that. And then when James showed up, well, the reactions were just perfect. Thanks so much for another great fic!

~Bella

Author's Response: Thank you. Especially for your first comment. *squishes* I love getting your reviews.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 08/24/08 19:23
Chapter: Envy and Fondness

That was really good! I would have liked it to be a bit longer, but it was still great! {BeccA}

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. My beta suggested some ideas of how to make a chaptered fic out of it. Maybe, one day... Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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