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Name: Josephine Granger (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 21:18 · For: Death: The Poisonous Arrow
That's so touching!! I loved it!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it pleased!!

Name: hpreader1 (Signed) · Date: 08/31/08 15:55 · For: Death: The Poisonous Arrow
Well, you definitely have a talent!!! All of your poems and stories have such amazing description that it just blows my mind. It takes a really good author to put the reader in the story (if you know what I mean). Sometimes you can use the least amount of words to make the biggest point. Thanks for the stories!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Is it really that good? I'm so glad that you like them so much. It makes me feel so good inside.

Name: hpreader1 (Signed) · Date: 08/17/08 20:27 · For: Death: The Poisonous Arrow
The words you used in this were absolutely perfect. I feel like I'm there watching it all happen. Even though it's extremely sad it makes you realize how quick life really is, you know?

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I am so glad that you like it. And, yeah, I know what you mean. That sounds weird, considering I wrote it. Just ignore that. The weird thing is, I wrote this a year ago before I had anything on MNFF. I just edited it before submitted.

Name: purplepanther (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 23:50 · For: Death: The Poisonous Arrow
I loved it, especially how you used "Like a poisonous arrow released from the deathly bow" near the beginning and again at the end. I also liked your description of Bellatrix (at least that's who I think it was). You illustrated Tonk's emotions very well. One thing I noticed though was the second to last line: did you mean peace instead of piece? Sorry for that bit of nitpicking, it's a bad habit of mine :)

Author's Response: Don't worry about nitpicking... I don't mind it! Besides, this is the longest review I've ever recieved! SWEET. Um, I think I probably did mean peace... I'm not sure. Anyway, thanks so much. I am glad you liked it! And, yes, it was Bellatrix.

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