*sob* The more I read about Remus and Tonks makes me realize more and more how sad their deaths were. That they left behind an innocent child who would never see his parents faces.

Author's Response: yes it was so depressing... it still is. *sigh* they didn't deserve death... neither did fred or snape. jo was being mean to us.

Aww. Remus is a great character, and it's nice to see his thoughts about Teddy.

The beginning was good. I liked the first stanza; it really caught my attention.

I left her,
My beautiful wife,
And then unborn child,
For the tiny life
Now wrapped in Dora’s hands?
What was wrong with me?

I wasn't sure what you meant when you were talking about "the tiny life". I know you are talking about Teddy, but when you read it aloud, it doesn't flow quite right.

I loved the ending. I liked your description of Remus's love for his family; it's sweet to see him so happy. It's interesting to see one of his greatest dreams - to have a family- being fulfilled. The last three lines were my favorites because they really potrayed this image powerfully.

~ Teresa

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry about the middle there. I guess it could cause questions to be asked when read aloud. I'm glad that you liked it though, and thanks for your review.

I think this is exactly as Remus would have acted

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad that I got it right. That's how I feel he would've been as well. (obviously)