Reviews For Family
Reviewer: AshTonks
Date: 09/25/09 11:52
Chapter: Family

*Bawls my eyes out*
I will never forgive JKR for that one...not Remus and Tonks. Ever.
This is a great poem and I really like the way you captured Remus finally realizing that having this family is something good. Great job!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Josephine Granger
Date: 08/01/09 21:21
Chapter: Family

*sob* The more I read about Remus and Tonks makes me realize more and more how sad their deaths were. That they left behind an innocent child who would never see his parents faces.

Author's Response: yes it was so depressing... it still is. *sigh* they didn't deserve death... neither did fred or snape. jo was being mean to us.

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 01/09/09 21:21
Chapter: Family

This is so good! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: tc015
Date: 09/30/08 20:30
Chapter: Family

Aww. Remus is a great character, and it's nice to see his thoughts about Teddy.

The beginning was good. I liked the first stanza; it really caught my attention.

I left her,
My beautiful wife,
And then unborn child,
For the tiny life
Now wrapped in Dora’s hands?
What was wrong with me?


I wasn't sure what you meant when you were talking about "the tiny life". I know you are talking about Teddy, but when you read it aloud, it doesn't flow quite right.

I loved the ending. I liked your description of Remus's love for his family; it's sweet to see him so happy. It's interesting to see one of his greatest dreams - to have a family- being fulfilled. The last three lines were my favorites because they really potrayed this image powerfully.

~ Teresa

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry about the middle there. I guess it could cause questions to be asked when read aloud. I'm glad that you liked it though, and thanks for your review.

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 08/17/08 20:29
Chapter: Family

Perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: LupinforTonks
Date: 08/15/08 7:02
Chapter: Family

I think this is exactly as Remus would have acted

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad that I got it right. That's how I feel he would've been as well. (obviously)

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 08/08/08 0:01
Chapter: Family

Very sweet, I love it. I'm glad Remus went back to his family and experienced such joy, if only for a short time.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad that he did too, though I do think that they still deserved life rather than an early death... but I won't rant about it, as I usually do. :P

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