Reviews For A Lesson in Love
Reviewer: acciolove
Date: 03/30/10 19:10
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

this makes me so happy.
amazing, spot on.

Reviewer: acciolove
Date: 03/30/10 19:10
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

this makes me so happy.
amazing, spot on.

Reviewer: dragon_princess
Date: 04/30/09 10:12
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

WOW. This was great. I'm speechless.

Author's Response: Really?! Glad you enjoyed it that much! :)

Reviewer: mugglemy2
Date: 03/11/09 19:38
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

very much in character. i like it

Author's Response: Glad you think so! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: FredForever
Date: 03/05/09 18:49
Chapter: A Lesson in Love


Author's Response: Heh heh, thanks!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/01/09 19:18
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

I love it!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: fairtradechocolate
Date: 09/22/08 23:32
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

This story is wonderful! The writing is great, and you can really get what the characters are feeling. Great job!

Author's Response: Wow, that's really wonderful to hear! Thanks so much for your kind words!

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 09/21/08 20:33
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

Such a precious story! It really does fit with Hermione's character and Ron's. I love Hermione's reaction to Ron's confession too! That was so much like her. After all, she was the one that had to make the first move for him to finally get it. :) Oh, and I love the description of Hermione as a "beautiful Medusa" too. That was too perfect. Great story! Hope you write more! :)

Author's Response: Wow, review number ten! You get an extra special thanks for that :) I'm so happy you enjoyed the story and found the in character, I love to hear that! And *cough cough* if you would like to read any more of my stuff...I have another few stories on my author's page/shameless self-advertising! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Black_Dust
Date: 09/15/08 17:50
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

*takes a slow, deep breath* wow, that was gorgeous! I loved it. Even got the little goosebump-type-tingles from it. :)

Excellent job and a great representation of the characters. The only critique I have is that I was a little unsure of where this was taking place (besides of course, in a sleeping type area) Good job though.

*now has to find a way to make an equally brillant banner for it*


Author's Response: Wow, Kasey, I'm honoured! First you agree to make me another banner, and then you leave me a wonderful review! I also really apprciate the crit you gave me; you have now inspired me to pay more attention to the surroundings in future stories! Thanks a million! ~Sarah

Reviewer: Moony14
Date: 08/23/08 20:09
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

Wow! such a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: potterfan48
Date: 08/16/08 1:44
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

Nice little fluffy piece. I was unsure about Hermione's reaction when she went Medusa on Ron.

Author's Response: Fluffy? Aw, man, I was trying to steer clear of fluff, but ah well. At least it was nice :) As for Hermione going Medusa on Ron's ass, I felt that Bellatrix's torture would have left both of them with unresolved issues. Yes, she probably goes a little more psycho than she normally would, but in my mind the experience unhinged her just a little. However, the main problem for her is that the man who she loves STILL can't get it into his head that she loves him as much as she does. Ron was the only thing that got her through the terrifying ordeal, and she's annoyed that he doesn't realise how important he is to her after all that time. Phew! Sorry for my long (and rambling) explanation! Thanks very much for the review!

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 08/15/08 4:31
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :) That was so surprising and so sweeettt :))))))

Author's Response: Yay, it's Munno! :) Thanks! Glad you liked it! *huggles* ~Sarah

Reviewer: hermione_freak22
Date: 08/14/08 16:04
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

this is an amzing work of writing. I love it it makes me want to cry. I am obsessed with Ron and Hermione and this is just, this makes me love their love( does that make sence?) more. good job. its perfect..

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! That is wonderful to hear. I know exactly what you mean; it is because I absolutely adore their relationship that I had to write this! Thank you so much for your kind review; I'm delighted now! My day's already off to a good start :)

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter
Date: 08/14/08 12:04
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

great story - love it

Author's Response: Wow, four reviews in one day! I'm getting quite giddy here! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 08/14/08 11:20
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

Hurray for angry Hermione!

That scene in Malfoy Manor was so, so intense, and your portrayal of Ron's helplessness (which had a sort of post-traumatic stress feel to it) was utterly fantastic. God, I love those two.

The birds line was my favourite. Only criticism would be that the second to last paragraph seemed a little contrived, maybe just didn't sound quite like him.

Great interaction, good story. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I always found the scene in Malfoy Manor very interesting - especially in regards to Ron and Hermione, and wondered about the after effect of it on them. Of course, they never really have any time to sit and brood about it, so I wondered how it might finally surface. I imagined it being something that terrified Ron for many nights afterwards, and something that might slightly hinder him (if you get what I mean) so I'm so pleased to hear I pulled that off okay! They really are fantastic, aren't they? :) I'm sorry the second last paragraph wasn't to your liking; I didn't think I'd overdone it, but hey, there you go! Once again, thanks for leaving your thoughts. I really apprreciate it!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 08/14/08 9:16
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

Aw! I absolutely adored reading this. Very in-character for both of them... my favorite line was "Well, I'm taller now—" - it's totally something Ron would say! I'll have to put this one in my favorites... a wonderful read. Great job!
PS- Hey, you're Sarah! *waves*

Author's Response: PnP! Longtime no see :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it - you've made my day! I looooove being favourited! So yay! I wanted to add a little humour to the story, so I'm happy that went down well, and it's great to hear the two of them are in character. Thanks a million for the review! See you around! Hee hee! ~Sarah

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 08/13/08 21:48
Chapter: A Lesson in Love

Very sweet, I loved it :) Both seemed to be in character, which I think is hard to do in a romance fic, so good job.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I'm so glad you feel they are in character - my number one goal is to never write fluffy characters, so I'm glad I dodged that bullet!

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