what happened! whats going to happen?? please finish i want to know so bad!
What!!!!!!!!!!!! How could Ginny be missing!! (shaking your shoulders) Tell me how!!!!!!
awesome ending. totally cliffhanger. write like the wind!!
You never wrote a second chapter!
I want more!
It's nice.
You write well!
keep writing this story is good!!!
im not sure if ive said any thing about this yet but it was really good and i truly cant wait for the next chapter! the only thing that would make it better is if you added some more detail, keep up the good work!
wow! awesome! plzee write the second chapt!
what!!!!! where is Ginny!!!!!!!!
I thought it was pretty darn good. Where's Ginny? Pretty good cliff hanger.
Sugar cookies are what I require.
Great story made by a great author.Keep writing and I am still waiting for the next chapter.
Wow, that was seriously dramatic, I really love the way you approached Harry's injuries with a ease, to make them sound not that bad but still bad. Much Peace-inspireme101
ah this is good! seriously great writing! Can't wait for chapter 2 to be up! x thanks for the e-cookie :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter two should be up shortly, and if you want, check out my new story that's going up soon called "Finding the Other Half". :)
lol, cookies... mmm... Wait what? Oh, right, I'd just like to say that for a first time fic writer, you're doing more than exceptionally well. Here's Sherri...
*swats Amy* Go on, get out of here! Pain in the butt... NE way, after Betaing all of Amy the Devil's fictions, I want to say that her first oe sucked compared to yours. very suspenseful!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love hearing from people; your feedback is great! Chapter two should be up soon :)
Ooh!
Loving this, I'm really into after the War stories right now!
Ron reacted well, and very maturely!
Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, unlike in most stories, I wanted to make Ron portrayed slightly more grown up; he is, after all, an adult now and has been through a war, which tends to have an impact on peoples' characters. Thanks for your great review! Chapter two should be up soon, and a new story should be validated fairly shortly! :)
