this is a really good story so far can't wait for the next post
Author's Response: thanks! As soon as the queue reopens, i'll get the second chapter up! :-D
Very interesting! I can't wait to see more! It's written well and it sounds extremely interesting, even if it would never happen.
Author's Response: thanks! I'm working on getting chapter 2 up to the mods standards, so hopefully it'll be up soon! :-D
(Amy:) Lol, I know what you mean.
(Sherri:) *smirks* She's a bit hyper today, bella, Idk y. ne ways, hope it's going well; I hate it when they do that.
(Sherri:) I'm sure it'll be a hit! btw, I gots a surprise....
(Amy:) I'm Ba-ack! Oh, it feels so good to be here again! I really can't wait to read chapter two, I'm sure it's going to be AWESOME.
~"Amy" Amelia and Sherri ;-)
Author's Response: Well chapter 2 got turned down, apparently I gave too much away. So my beta and I are working on it and hopefully will have it back in the queue at the end of the week!!!!!!! Amy, yay! In my opinion, it's going to be awesome too...but I may be a little biased...hm...haha!
(Sherri:) Yeah, it's a bit annoying for both of us. Her, because she's sick and me because I have to worry about her constantly. It was scary; last night she had such a high temp she was hullucinating and I had to drive her to the hospital. She's fine now, but she's on bedrest, and I can't even let her boyfriend in the room to see her.
P.S. I love cliffs!
TTYL, Sherri ;-)
Author's Response: oh no! That is really horrible, ive been lucky enough to never get sick enough to be hospitalized. I'm glad she's better though, even if shes on bed rest! ...still waiting for Chapter 2 to be validated...im just as anxious as you all are, because I want to see what people think! :-D
(sherri): Oh Oliver hated me! Where as he usually never leaves my side, that week he only accepted food from Amy (who was staying with me for the summer). Oh, well, stubborn little thing got over it eventually. Speaking of amy, the reason she's not reviewing is because she came down with the flu. But I have been reading the stories to her, and that seems to be working. (she seems prone to ask for this one)
TTYL, Sherri ;-)
Author's Response: hahahaha...when i go to school and come back after a few months, my cats ignore me for like a week. its pretty funny but sad!!!!!! Poor amy! I had the flu last year and it suuuccckkkeeedd!! The second chapter is getting validated...and i think everyone will be happy with the information revealed, but hate me for the cliffhanger! --Bella
I know I have read this chapter being your beta, but I had to read it up. I still hate the cliff. LOL You captured my attention the first time I read this. You showed enough to make me want more.
Two little things, both formatting stuff. The letter. I think it would be better if you took it out of the center and italicized it. Also, about half way through, there is a really long paragraph that would probably be an easier read if it were split into two.
One more thing, I love the way you captured George at the end. Great job.
(amy): Thank you! Same here.
sherri: btw, I was talking to my boyfriend on the phone, watching grey's anatomy, AND trying to do my laundry at the same time. lucky Amy doesn't miss a thing, or else poor old Oliver would have drowned in soapy garments!
~Amy Amelia & Sherri ;-)
Author's Response: hahaha aw poor cat! I have 5 cats myself haha. I've never had one come close to drowning, but I have lost one and then found it behind the washing machine later that day (alive!). haha --Bella
(Sherri): Honestly, after reading psycho's fictions, I couldn't read them with out the cliffs!
(Amy): Shut up, Sherri, I'm not the one that tried to wash her cat.
~"Amy" Amelia & Sherri ;-)
Author's Response: hahaha you two are hilarious by the way! I love cliffhangers. Love 'em and hate 'em!
I love it! Brilliant start to the story regarding Ginny, Lily and George. I so look forward how it all came to be. Please continue on dont leave the story I just love your first chapter and cant wait til chapter two to be done and read. Loving it!
Author's Response: thanks! The next chapter will be much more revealing, I promise. It's in the queue so keep checking back! Thanks for reading! :-D
Well, well, I wonder why George is looking for her instead of Harry. Is that the reason this is an AU.
Author's Response: Well its mostly AU because of the situations the characters are in. You'll understand more when the second chapter is up, it's in the queue right now! Thanks for reading!
excellent! cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter two is in the queue!
No prob! Hang on, my annoying, beta/roomy wants to comment...
I'm not annoying! Hey ther, I just wanted to say that I love where you're going with this plot! keep up the good work!
~"Amy" Amelia & Sherri ;-)
Author's Response: hahaha thanks both of you! All these reviews mean so much, since this is my first individual story and all!!!! Keep checking back for the second chapter, it gets much more interesting and has a cliffhanger that will leave you hating me!!!! :-D
"It wasn't over, it still isn't over". isn't that from "The Notebook"?
It was pretty well written, though I'm not sure exactly where the plot is going, but I guess that could be construed as a good thing!
Oh, and don't they have elevators(lifts) in the Ministry of Magic, so that wouldn' really be a Muggle thing would it?
Author's Response: Yes, its a line from the notebook and a song title by Dropout Year. The first chapter is really just laying the foundation, it gets much more interesting in the second chapter, and much more is revealed. Should be validated in a week, so keep checking back! Good catch on the lifts..hm. I may have to go back and change it. brilliant catch actually haha. Thanks for reading!
So far... seems REALY GOOD!
I love these kinds of stories... heartwarming, very good with a cup of tea
Author's Response: thanks! This is the first story i've written and submitted by myself, so i love these reviews!
Ooh, I like this.
A lot, and I get to be first!! Yay me!
Author's Response: thanks!!!!!! :-D