AH! I love it! Snape/Lily is my favorite ship that never was. Remus/Tonks is my fav ship ever, tho. I really like all your stories! This poem really captures what i think about when I read about Severus falling in love with Lily. Major kudos!
P.S. I just wrote a fic from Lily's pov about the day he called her Mudblood, so I'd love u to read and review!
Author's Response: I shall definitely read and review, though nearly two years later than you posted this. i'm sorry about that!!
Up until the last book you never think that Snape is capable of love, but this probably sums it up.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!
Well I've never read much poetry on MNFF, but your's is quite good. Very good description, his questioning of these newfound emotions seemed real. Nice job! Just one question...did you write this with two particular characters in mind, or is it up to the reader to interpret who they are?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad it seemed real. Yeah, I had the idea of Sev and Lily, when Severus was first realising his love for her, and how it made him feel.
Very beautiful and great imagery.
Author's Response: Yay! First review for this! Thank you so much. I'm glad that you like it!!