Very well written! I could feel all the emotions Teddy felt, and I loved the "proposal" scene! Good job!
I loved this. The premise was excellent, and I like the way you wrote it.
Teddy going in on his own first was brilliant. I think that he would have needed to do that.
I loved the proposal scene as well. It was just the thing to prepare us for the next part.
The ending was just beautiful and perfect.
Your writing was really able to make me feel the emotions so well done.
It was a beautiful story. A really inspired idea, and skillfully written. Great job!