Reviews For Suspended in Time
Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 08/02/08 19:25
Chapter: Suspended in Time

Very well written! I could feel all the emotions Teddy felt, and I loved the "proposal" scene! Good job!

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 07/25/08 3:26
Chapter: Suspended in Time

I loved this. The premise was excellent, and I like the way you wrote it.

Teddy going in on his own first was brilliant. I think that he would have needed to do that.

I loved the proposal scene as well. It was just the thing to prepare us for the next part.

The ending was just beautiful and perfect.

Your writing was really able to make me feel the emotions so well done.

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 07/24/08 21:50
Chapter: Suspended in Time

It was a beautiful story. A really inspired idea, and skillfully written. Great job!

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