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Name: GinnyPotterFan26 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/10 15:19 · For: Chapter Fourteen: Love Works in the Weirdest of Ways
I really liked this fic. It was creative and a very unique take on Lily and James's start as a couple.


Name: GinnyPotterFan26 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 8:58 · For: Chapter Ten:: Every Man's Worst Fear
Gotta love Scrubs.

Poor James...

Sometimes the dialogue is a bit choppy, but I think the plot ideas are wonderful.


Name: Equinox Chick (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 3:30 · For: Chapter Three: It Must Be The Shampoo
Oh Lordy. I've just recorded this chapter for Audio fics and had to pause several times because I was laughing so much. My favourite bit is this. Twenty minutes later, James brushed passed Lily on the way to Transfiguration. Standing on tip-toes, he whispered something into her ear. “I don’t think your relationship worked out.”

LOL - so funny. ~Carole~


Name: GinnyPotterFan26 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 1:01 · For: Chapter Five: The Moronic Moose
I think Madame Pomfrey would've been at least a little annoyed with Sirius (and shown some sort of reaction, even if it might have been small) to his brash attitude towards describing James's "symptoms."


Name: GinnyPotterFan26 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/10 23:30 · For: Chapter Three: It Must Be The Shampoo
I'm interested to see what happens.

I do have a quick comment on the writing. In the dialogue, it is okay to use contractions. Contractions started because people became lazy in their speech, and it sounds unnatural in this day and age for people to speak without them, other than cases of emphasis/clarification. I think this is especially true with the word "is," since people tend to just slide into it making more of just a "s" sound.


Name: Realchosenone (Signed) · Date: 03/03/10 20:07 · For: Chapter Fourteen: Love Works in the Weirdest of Ways
I thought this was incredibly cute and funny. I laughed out loud at certain parts, which is not something I typically do when reading fanfics. You kept my interest because I actually sat here and read the entire thing. It was a bit long, but worth it.


Name: GinervaPotter002 (Signed) · Date: 01/19/10 17:34 · For: Chapter Fourteen: Love Works in the Weirdest of Ways
Yea! What a miraculous story! But I wish you could go up until when they...died...WAHHHHH!!!


Name: GinervaPotter002 (Signed) · Date: 01/19/10 16:48 · For: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory
Seriously? Professor McGonagall's face? I didn't wan't 'Lily' to get in trouble! Oh, well...LOL


Name: GinervaPotter002 (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 14:00 · For: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?
I read this story(part of it anyway) before. I'm kinda disgusted by the REmus/Lily(James) part. Kinda AWKWARD


Name: Lily4James (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 11:19 · For: Chapter Fourteen: Love Works in the Weirdest of Ways
WOW

ok so i sat and read this whole fic last night til like 4.30am, so worth it, i loved it!

i haven't read fanfic in a while and it was a great way to get back into it. laughed so hard at moments such as the part where 'Lily' tries to explain why she calls Madam Pomfrey Lily, and the trial the marauders hold, and James' attachment to the book.

This fic is awesome :)

Author's Response: Tee Hee, I hope you don't have anything important on today! It's been a long time since someone has responded to all chapters, thank you so much for taking the time. Those were three of my favourite moments (the 'Lily' thing originally sprang from a typo.) I must say, I laughed when I read your review about how James was going to kill Remus. I hope you enjoy getting back into fanfiction ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 9:54 · For: Chapter Fourteen: Love Works in the Weirdest of Ways
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I loved the story! A perfect 10! It was one of the best stories I've ever read! It definitely has a permanent spot on my favorites!!! Bravo! Brava!


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 9:31 · For: Chapter Thirteen: Every Good Romance Needs An Exciting and Deadly Chase Scene
OMG! I can't wait to read the end! I loved this chapter, especially the ending! Sirius is hilarious!


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 19:37 · For: Chapter Twelve: Objection!
Ok, so I was laughing my head off when 'James' had to streak, but I was bawling when I heard Sirius' story! You're a magnificent author! I can't wait to finish the story!


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 19:09 · For: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory
Awwwwwwwwwww... the end is so sweet. Another fantastic chapter! (I'm running out of adjetives!)


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 18:50 · For: Chapter Ten:: Every Man's Worst Fear
Ok, discard my last commetn about James killing Remus- I should have known better. Either way, a terrific chapter!


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 18:32 · For: Chapter Nine: Sorry for the Inconvenience
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously! I sat reading this the entire time with my hands over my mouth, gasping endlessly, especially at the end (James is gonna murder Remus when's he's back in his own body!)! Another wonderfully enjoyable (yet shocking) chapter!


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 18:16 · For: Chapter Eight: What's Our Game Plan?
Another too great chapter! You never disappoint!


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 18:01 · For: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue
Awwwwwwww.... the end is sooooooo sweet! I loved the chapter! I cannot wait to finish the story!


Name: 94Hippogriffs (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 21:48 · For: Chapter Four: I Canít Get Enough Of Your Love, Babe
all I can say is wow. this is so funny!


Name: miss ginny1 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 20:20 · For: Chapter Six: Concurrent Concussions
Yet another unnaturally awesomatacular (me and my friend made up the word) chapter!


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