Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 01/17/09 7:42
Chapter: Chapter Eight: What's Our Game Plan?

ARGH! I hate clif hangers. But the chapter itself was very good. I loved it when Lily hit Roger on the head and scored at the same time. Update soon (please!)

Author's Response: Lol, sorry, my bad. I'm glad you liked the chapter though :) I will be adding Chapter Nine to the queue very soon.

Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 01/17/09 7:18
Chapter: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?

hahaha good :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 01/17/09 2:54
Chapter: Chapter Eight: What's Our Game Plan?

Oh, this is clever. I have been wondering how you'll do the Quidditch match, and now I know. Hufflepuffs playing dirty; as a 'Puff that makes me proud. It's nice to know they're not docile 'duffers' all the time.

I really did enjoy the 'girly night'. James' first embarrassed reaction at the girls taking their clothes off and then his subsequent egging on was very funny. Typical boy!

I like Alice in this fic. She's becoming a 'real' character. Of course she must have been clever and brave (she was an Auror after all) but we see so little of her in fics apart from as Neville's mum. She's smart and funny. The revelation (if indeed it is a revelation) about Remus is interesting. Is James as Lily going to punch out the werewolf?

I have a nit pick, however; Snitch needs to be capitalised.

My absolute favourite parts of this chapter are James' worry over Lily getting hurt coupled with the fervent wish that their children inherit his Quidditch skills. Touching, yet funny.

I love this story!

Author's Response: Awww thanks for the awesome review Carole! Whoot go Hufflepuff! It's so much fun to make them play dirty, their playing style is never much described in the books. They had motive, those sneaky Hufflepuffs...

I really enjoyed writing the 'girly night'. Boys... hehe they are so typical.

I'm so glad you like Alice. Her character is becoming clearer and clearer to me. There will be a chapter later on where both the "sidekicks" talk about themselves a little bit. I'm glad you like how Alice is being characterised. It is indeed a revelation... but that is all I am going to say :D

Thanks for picking that up! Comments like that help me improve my fics :)

I'm glad you liked that bit. Even though it has heaps of humour, deep down it is a romance story. I'm so glad you are really liking this story. Congrats on becoming a MerMuggle! And I will get around to writing that prompt you left for me in the Three Broomsticks I swear :) Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 01/13/09 14:12
Chapter: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?

YH ok my fave story
dont take this personally if u read my review nd this is not ur story i havnt read many yet lol
how many chapters till the end i wanna Know how it ends :P
Kk xx

Author's Response: Lol :D. Yes I did write this, and still am writing this. I'm glad it's your favourite stories. I'm halfway though writing chapter ten, but I think there will be three more chapters after that. So in total 5 chapters. However, that is only the minimum. It might go up if I think of something else I want to add. As for the end, I actually wrote it out last night. You'll have to wait and see :)

Reviewer: crzyabtpttr
Date: 01/12/09 5:57
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

GOSH!!!!!!! if patience is virtue , i hav no virtue at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!can't seem to sty fr a min widout tinkng of wats gonna happn in ur stry!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE updat soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: 100 reviews! Thank you so much! I never expected to get this far, actually on my 10th review I actually responded with, "It has been my dream to reach 10 reviews!" Now I got to 100. *SSSSQQQQQQUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEE* Thanks everyone. Ah, crzyabtpttr. Alas, it is no longer in my hands, I must await validation from a mod. That can take anywhere from a few days to a few weeks. Fingers crossed it gets validated. Patience is indeed a virtue, don't worry, I don't have much either.

Reviewer: crzyabtpttr
Date: 01/12/09 5:43
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

TOTALLY AMAZNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luv de idea of switchng bdys!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat happns nxt!!!!?????? i hop da nxt chaptr cums rely soon(b4 my unit tests strt nxt week) so dat i wont hav to keep tinkng abt wats gonna happn!!!!!!!! hw many chaptrs ar left b4 ur stry ends?(i hop atleast a million)!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review :D:D For a sneak previews of what's happening next, have a look at my authors page. But I can't give too much away, Lol! Chapter 8 is in the queue, and Chapter nine is ready to go. As for how many Chapters are left to go, originally the whole thing was only going to be 10 chapters, however, right now the plan is for 13 chapters. That will probably go up when I have more ideas. But yeah, right now, five more chapters left. Thanks again for reviewing, I'm glad you are enjoying it. (Oh my god, only one review until One-Hundred!!)

Reviewer: icecreamagnette
Date: 01/11/09 18:50
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

Okay. Since the title of this chapter is, "Patience is a Virtue", I'll be waiting very very VERY patiently for your next update. This is definitely one of my favorites now. I love it to death. :)) :)) LJ is so cute. Great job. You deserve tons of COOKIES. hahahaha!

Author's Response: Hehe, or you could be like James and demand to know :P. Lol actually chapter 8 is in the queue, so it shouldn't be too long. Chapter Nine is completely written and nearly ready to go (one half of my brilliant beta team still has to send it back). For more information on updates, check out my authors page. Thank you for reviewing on every chapter! YOU deserve tons of cookies. LJ is awesome. I may go and write some more on Chapter Ten now.... (two reviews until one-hundred. *squee*)

Reviewer: icecreamagnette
Date: 01/11/09 18:46
Chapter: Chapter Six: Concurrent Concussions

Aww. Poor Lily! Haha. =)) This got me rolling.

Author's Response: Hehehe, it is so much fun to mess with the characters, seriously. I'm glad I made you laugh! (Okay, I've stuffed up my countdown, so skipping four, three more until 100!)

Reviewer: icecreamagnette
Date: 01/11/09 18:45
Chapter: Chapter Five: The Moronic Moose

Awww. Lily finally learned the Marauders' secret! :) I love you for making this fic. Haha.

Author's Response: I love you for reviewing this fic! Seriously, it was awesome to get home from work to see seven reviews popped up in my inbox. It is people like you who make me want to keep writing and finish this story. (five reviews until 100, *squee*)

Reviewer: icecreamagnette
Date: 01/11/09 18:42
Chapter: Chapter Four: I Canít Get Enough Of Your Love, Babe

LOL! =)) This is definitely one of the best LJ fics I've ever read. Good job.

Author's Response: :D:D Awww, now your making me blush! I'm really glad you are enjoying it (seven reviews until 100!)

Reviewer: icecreamagnette
Date: 01/11/09 18:39
Chapter: Chapter Three: It Must Be The Shampoo

Hilarious! :)) This will end up on my favorites list. Haha.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love it when people put it on their favourites list AND review. You are awesome! (Six reviews until 100 :D)

Reviewer: icecreamagnette
Date: 01/11/09 18:37
Chapter: Chapter Two: When You Become Exceedingly Handsome

This just keeps getting better. :)) :))

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm so glad you are enjoying it! (nine to go)

Reviewer: icecreamagnette
Date: 01/11/09 18:35
Chapter: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?

I like where this story is going so far... :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review, (eight to go!)

Reviewer: 11phoenixtears
Date: 01/11/09 13:39
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

the preview is hilarious. I love how earlier he mentioned that sirius was at the top of his list of people not to kiss, and now he is dared to kiss him!

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad that you liked the preview. It's a direct quote from Chapter 8, that is currently in the Queue at the moment, fingers crossed for a quick validation. Thanks for the review, I'm really glad that you are enjoying the story! (nine more reviews to go :D )

Reviewer: le soleil
Date: 01/11/09 12:06
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

Haha, I laughed so hard during this story! I just finished until here and hope the next chapters will be up soon. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yay 90 reviews :D:D! I'm glad you were laughing during this story! Next Chapter is in the queue, so fingers crossed it gets validated. Because I never really expected to get this far, and I'm super excited, I think I'm going to start counting down reviews until 100 :D. Thanks again for the review! (10 more to go!)

Reviewer: crzyabtpttr
Date: 01/10/09 11:58
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

i luv de idea of switching bodies!!!!!!!!!!! james n lily are soo cut.pleeeeeeeeeeeese write the next chapters really soon

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Chapter 8: What's out game plan, is in the queue, so fingers crossed for a quick update. Chapter Nine is also ready to go. I'm glad you are enjoying it :)

Reviewer: yoursammy
Date: 01/08/09 1:47
Chapter: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?

its just amazing! I had stitches in my tummy laughing........my pre-board exams are on so theres too much of tension.......but honestly after reading this fic i feeling so very better...m feeling so refreshed and i have also told all my friends to read this........please update soon.................cheers...!

PS:- i have added dis 2 my fav.!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Exams suck, so I'm glad I was able to relive the tension from you for a while. I wish you luck! :) As for updates, Chapter 8 is in the Queue as we speak, for a sneak preview check out my Authors page. Thanks again for review and adding to your favourites. It really makes me want to write more :D

Reviewer: mauradersometimes
Date: 12/30/08 10:38
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

I've just added it to my favourites! :D
... because it's really funny and always me laugh, and I think the whole idea is great! Thanks for writing it....
x

Author's Response: Awww thanks for the really nice review :) I'm glad you are enjoying it and you have added it to your favourites.

Reviewer: Lazy Lazuli
Date: 12/29/08 20:04
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

OMG BEST LILY/JAMES FIC EVER

Possible Idea: The antidote for the potion is discovered by Lily, but she decides not to tell James

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. Oh wow that's such a cool idea! I do have a different ending planned though ... You'll just have to wait as see :)

Reviewer: Move-Over-Ginny
Date: 12/29/08 18:59
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY SO SO SOOOOOO MUCCCHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have it on my favourites but haven't reviewed till now.
IT IS AWESOME!!!
UPDATE AS QUICK AS POSSIBLE!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and adding to your favourites :) It really means a lot and makes me want to go and write some more :D. As for updates, I've nearly finished Chapter Eight, so hopefully not too long...

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