Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 09/27/09 23:14
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Every Good Romance Needs An Exciting and Deadly Chase Scene

WOW that was a really good chapter! i liked it a lot! and ya every good romance story needs a good chase scene! =D lol that was really funny! i cant wait till the wedding and i hope they never go back to themselves! i like them 2 much all switched up! this is such a good story and i hope u can update quickly!!!

Author's Response: What's a romance without a chase scene? Sadly, the wedding will be a long way away... maybe I'll have to write it. I'm glad you are enjoying it :D

Reviewer: pinkerton3gg
Date: 09/27/09 21:09
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Every Good Romance Needs An Exciting and Deadly Chase Scene

i do enjoy it. especialy when lily cries abt the wedding

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: type-n-shadow
Date: 09/27/09 20:23
Chapter: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?

This story keeps live-entertaining. I'm really addicted to it. A seemingly un-original idea, but made into a hilarious, unique, well-put story. Love it! If i see any problems I will let you know.

Reviewer: lilbells
Date: 09/27/09 14:00
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Every Good Romance Needs An Exciting and Deadly Chase Scene

i love this story...
it just gets better and better!

ps. loved the last sentence!

Author's Response: Thanks! Last sentence was a quick change at the end when I had the idea. Glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/27/09 13:45
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Every Good Romance Needs An Exciting and Deadly Chase Scene

Uh, I loooved it! It was so great! I am looking forward to the next chapter. And it would be GREAT if Carole would record this!!! (:

Author's Response: Thanks :) I was so excited when Carole said she would record this. It would be great :)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/27/09 10:51
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Every Good Romance Needs An Exciting and Deadly Chase Scene

I really love this chapter. It's very good. The ending made me laugh so hard! It was very funny.

I love what the locket means. It's a very good story. It seems very real too, like it could've happened. I'm so excited fore the next chapter. I hope it's up soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'd planned the locket for a long time, since before chapter five, so I'm happy it all worked out :)

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 09/15/09 20:25
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE.UPDATE. you do not know how agonizing it is to make my weekly little trip to mugglenet, check all of my lesser fics i read (all of THEM updated, 4 in total ), then get here update. it makes me so sad inside. please, i speak for all of us when i say "please update b4 i have to find a new addiction and/or reason to procrastinate"

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 09/02/09 16:26
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

awww i love that chapter!!!

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 09/02/09 15:43
Chapter: Chapter Ten:: Every Man's Worst Fear

lol i love that chapter!!!!!!

and also i watch scrubs im always reminded of turk when he walks away from jd shaking his head whenever i think dramatic exit

Reviewer: harrypotterfan12345
Date: 08/31/09 10:44
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

i loved it! plz keep going

Reviewer: littlegirlpunk
Date: 08/19/09 16:33
Chapter: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?

I LOVE THIS STORY!!Its my fave fanfic so far.It can also stay my fave if you WRITE MORE CHAPTERS! I really hope you write more chapters to this story.The only thing i hate about it is that your leaving the story hanging.But everything else is exellent.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/18/09 9:21
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

“Overruled,” Sirius called, with a little rap of his hammer. Lily rolled her eyes. Could James’ friends get any stupider?

lol. Great chapter. the trial thing was hysterical. I've got this on my favorites list, but I"m all sad now cuz i'm caught up. please update soon!

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/18/09 9:10
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory

Excellent chapter. I think yo're right; everyone is going crazy. :-)

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/18/09 9:01
Chapter: Chapter Ten:: Every Man's Worst Fear

“Jees, Lily! It was only a joke…”

should it be "geez" or "jeez'? i've never seen it spelled the way you used.

great chapter, again.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/18/09 8:51
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Sorry for the Inconvenience

Awesome, as usual.

minor nitpick:
It seemed that Peter and Sirius had made it back to before them as three tables had been pushed together...

should it be, "back before them?"

btw, love the chapter title.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/18/09 8:40
Chapter: Chapter Eight: What's Our Game Plan?

If we ever got out of this mess, he thought to himself, I pray to Merlin that our children inherit my Quidditch genes.

haha. foreshadowing. love it.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/17/09 22:47
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue

“They call her Poppy because it’s ironic? Oh Merlin, James that is the most ridiculous thing I have ever heard…”

Me too. Lol.

“What the bloody hell is a virtue anyway?” James yelled at Lily’s retreating back. “Sounds like a load of bullocks.”

Where do you COME UP with this stuff? And I am defninitely putting htis on my favorites. :-)

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/17/09 22:33
Chapter: Chapter Six: Concurrent Concussions


Strangely Rodger put down his wand also, making Lily feel hopeful for a second. Maybe he did want to sort things out. Her hopes, however, were dashed with Rodgers words, “I am going to fight you like a man, Potter. You going to wuss out?”

Oh dear.

Lily's reaction to someone wanting to beat her up made me lol.

Almost afraid to know the answer, Lily asked, “Do you all remember my nickname?”

“The Gardener,” they all chorused. “Because you like to keep control of the plants.”

I laughed so hard at that. It sounded sort of cultlike to me, though I'm sure you didn't intend it that way.

I love the thing with James and the romance novel. Awesome job!

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/17/09 22:24
Chapter: Chapter Five: The Moronic Moose

I like this chapter. Loved Lily's reaction to Sirius's animagus. this whole thing is really well written.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/17/09 22:02
Chapter: Chapter Four: I Canít Get Enough Of Your Love, Babe

I have no clue what will happen next, and I'm not even gonna guess. I'm certainly enjoying my self, though. :D

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