DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!! good story! i've never read one that shows rose as the bad person! :-P interesting... update soon!
More and more interesting... hope you'll update regularly!
By the way, I love your descriptions. It's almost as if I was in Knockturn Alley with them...
Hi, Kristen! Just popping in to say this story rocks and I'll be lurking around it, even if I can't beta for you anymore :( oh well, good luck. I know the rest of it will be brilliant.
Thanks for naming your OC after me, btw. I'm flattered. Thank heavens she's no longer called [female OC]!
~Lyra
Author's Response:aww, thanks Lyra... I know yeah, lol!
Kristen x
I thought this was great!
Author's Response:Thank you!
Kristen x
This is really good... I'm hooked!
Lola x
Author's Response:Thank you! I'm glad that you like it!
Kristen x
Quite an intriguing beginnig. Keep up!
Author's Response:I will, and thanks for reviewing!
Kristen x
What an interesting story! I was drawn to it by your original title, but your summary and story sucked me in immediately. I enjoyed this first chapter and will definitely be reading more!
Author's Response:Aaw, thanks! I hope I can keep you sucked in!
Thank you for reviewing!
Kristen x
oooohhhh i like it already! your imagery and sense of purpose is very very good and i like stories that introduce new characters!
Author's Response:Oh, wow! I'm glad you like it! Thank you for reviewing!
Kristen x
