Reviews For A Mother's Lament
Reviewer: Wynn Terre
Date: 01/20/09 19:03
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

This was a beautiful story. I was all teary while reading it. What a lovely insight into the mind of a mom

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I'm sorry I made you cry, but I guess I did my job properly :). I love Molly Weasley, and I just thought she deserved to have a voice.

Reviewer: Adeyla
Date: 11/16/08 0:24
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

i really loved this, it made me cry and it was really well written!

Author's Response: Thanks again.

Reviewer: Adeyla
Date: 11/16/08 0:24
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

i really loved this, it made me cry and it was really well written!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind review.

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 07/26/08 17:23
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

I loved reading this-- I thought that you captured Molly's love well.

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you loved it. Thanks for the complement, it was important for me to capture her character accurately and I'm happy to hear that I did. Thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 07/24/08 16:52
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

i read this and i needed the kleenex. great job!

it was a tad bit annoying with all the *** thingys though... you could probably just have said anything you recognize from DH wasn't yours or something. it just distracted me a bit. sorry :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Neville_lvr55
Date: 07/24/08 0:05
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

This was an awesome fic! All the character's emotions realy showed and it made me cry.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a great review. Sorry about making you cry, but I guess I did my job properly as a writer :-)

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 07/23/08 15:15
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

Yes, I liked - sorry I didn't say earlier, I was just very confused!! >.< It was very good, I think you brought out the emotion very well. I loved the line "Not Harry too", because it was just filled with dread and fear, and it was just perfect. :)

~Evie

Author's Response: Thank you Evie. I'm glad to hear you liked it. Thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 07/23/08 12:43
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

I really think that you have captured Molly well here.

Her denial of Freds death was wonderful, and made the story even sadder, because we can feel Molly's grief. I love the part where she can't find a pulse and tries to convice herself that she's not checking in the right place.

I also loved that she doesn't really come out of her grief until she sees George. I think that this is very like Molly. She will pull herself together to be there for her other children.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and for taking the time to leave a review. It was important for me to capture Molly's character accurately and I'm glad to hear that I accomplished it. Every part of this story was challenging and liberating to write. My favorite part is the scene with George too.

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 07/23/08 12:25
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

I really liked this story. It was very well written, and sad. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. I'm happy you liked it. It was my first attempt at an angsty story.

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 07/23/08 5:54
Chapter: A Mother's Lament

Okay, I have either got the strangest sense of deja vu, or I have read this before . . .

Author's Response: You probably read it on Fanfiction.net I posted it there first, but I may take it down as this version is a lot better (I think anyway). Did you at least like it?

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