This is an amazing! I love everything about it. I admit that I got the chills while reading this, but that is what makes a good story. =) ~MJ
"Finally, I managed to do something right."
*sigh* And then it all went horribly wrong. Poor Severus, Lily, James and Harry...
'Thanks for this,
Trying to think of a word for this story... hmm... *cries* Even if I never see her again, she will be safe. Dumbledore will make sure of that. Finally, I managed to do something right. *wails* I'm crying all over your story again... the word that comes to mind is bittersweet... and phenomenal... and *sobsniff*
Snape is so complex, isn't he? You did an amazing job in letting some rays of light shine through his desperation, mixing the Snape Harry meets at Hogwarts with the Severus Lily knew... Very good!
Very nice and well written. It is easy to really feel for him at the end when you know what the final result will be.
You are very talented. I love this: How my sacrifice was much greater than Potter's, because he would have given his life for his wife, his child, while I was ready to - and did - sacrifice myself for something that was never mine, something that he made sure was never mine.
I read your bio, and you are right, He is a writer's dream. I love Severus Snape, but I won't go into detail about that...
Brilliant story, hope to read more.
Wow! This was extremely powerful, emotional, and has the feeling of desperation all the way through it. Very well-written! I love how you managed to capture Severus Snape--intelligent, worried, snarky ("...never that it was that long a stroll, naturally"), and resignation. Excellent!