Ah, Allie, you write the most beautiful poetry. The ideas themselves are just so simple and beautiful and touching. I really can't express it any better than that. You have a gift, dear. =)
I love the repetition of 'Little girl' and how it changed to 'Wilted girl' and 'Wizened girl' and so on. I absolutely love how you use repetition - and changes in repetition, like that - in your poems (you do much the same thing in Remember Me Fondly). It's a really simple thing but very powerful, and it helped really show what Luna was beginning to see.
I don't even know if I have a favorite part of this poem. I love it all.