great! keep writing!
I really like this story. I'm actually kind of excited to see James' and Lily's relationship through someone else's eyes.
OOOOOOooooo snap! Lily's caught!
I love it! Please keep writing
Oh, I love it! Remus has always been one of my favourite characters, it's nice to see his point of view.
I really like this story so far
I love the idea of having it in Remus's perspective
i really liked it, love the fact that it's from remus' POV, makes things different. just thought it could be longer, i hope you have a new chapter out soon, to make up for it xD
haha poor lily
i like your story please update frequently
I loved reading this. It's exactly the way I imagined the characters, and Lupin does notice things that no one else does. Lily would definitely deny thinking about James any more than necessary, as she's supposed to 'hate' him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Different twist with having Remus' POV telling the story. I can tell this story is going to be different and interesting, but in a good way.
Negatives: A bit short, not very indepth
Positives: Different POV, Lily doesn't overly hate James(some people really over do it and then when Lily does fall for James, it just doesn't seem quite right), the Remus/Lily relationship was built nicely -- a solid friendship
Can't wait to read more!
good start. i like it so far =]