Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker
Date: 07/27/08 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good story and a great manipulation of the prompts.  You did a good job capturing the characters and the story flowed really well.

~Kristy (gauntlet guide/judge round 6)



Author's Response: Hmm, I thought for sure I responded to this eons ago . . . anyway, thank you so much, Kristy! :)

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/15/08 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this was brilliantly written, very probable and you got the characters perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you! My partner and I struggled a lot with characterization, so it's nice to hear that you think we did a good job with that. :)

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