Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 08/02/11 12:28
Chapter: An Unusual Love

Hee hee!!!! This story was epically epic!!!!!!! It was horribly cute and totally original!!! I'm pretty much jelous of your amazing writing skillz!!!!! Great job!!!!

Reviewer: Firoy
Date: 09/04/08 13:04
Chapter: An Unusual Love

Great Story! I laughed so much when Dudley says tro Harry "That bushy haired girl who seems to know everything"!!! LOL. And the Gnomes were great, really great use of Luna and yes it definitely is a strange coupling!

Reviewer: Vitamin Vicki
Date: 07/28/08 14:19
Chapter: An Unusual Love

Aww! This story is so cute. I love it. There's so many time lapses! I have to keep stopping and reminding myself what's happened, c: And, how in the name of Merlin's soggy underpants did Vernon and Petunia even get to that summer house? They must be very sneaky, or else stalking Dudley and Luna... :D /joke

Vicki c:

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 07/17/08 16:51
Chapter: An Unusual Love

This story is unbelievably adorable. You have no idea how cute I found this, and it was so original and interesting. I know both of you are great writers, so I shouldn't be so surprised, but still!

I loved Harry being a manipulative jerk in the beginning, Luna's very in-character dottiness, the gruff little gnome (reminds me of something straight out of Terry Pratchett), and the many obstacles in their relationship. And Dudley/Luna is such a cool ship, you don't see it much. Oh, and I really loved the heart pendant idea, and the Snorkack. Vernon and Petunia were funny, too.

Just two nitpicks-- Dudley's eyes are blue-grey in the beginning and brown in the end. Also, the gnome's name. Was it Guppy or Gape?

This is still really great. For some reason, Luna REALLY reminds me of Ariel from "The Little Mermaid."

Good luck on the Gauntlet, kiddies!

Author's Response: Sainyn says: Ohmigosh, teh Schmergster reviewed our story! Thanks for the review, and you know what? About Dudley's eyes, you're right. They're supposed to be blue. *runs off to change it* And there are actually two gnomes, one named Guppy and one named Gape. Again, thanks for the splediferous review! ~BB Arya says: *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* YOU REVIEWED OUR STORY. *HUGGLES* Yeah, Guppy and Gape are might have missed a sentence. Not to worry, though, and thanks sooooo mcuh! *SQUEEE*

Reviewer: LilyGinnyWrites92
Date: 07/14/08 14:07
Chapter: An Unusual Love

BB, Arya, that was SOO good! You really made the characters believable, and the plot was really good!

Kate aka th_poet14

Author's Response: BB says: Hey Kate, Thanks for the review! This is my first try at writing Dudley, and I'm glad to hear that it turned out believable... And you are also the my FIRST reviewer, so you get the title of Sainyn's First Reviewer... Not that anyone would want that title! ~BB Arya says: KAAAATEE!!!!! *SQUEEEEEEEEEE* Thanks for the review!! I'm really good at Luna, or so I've heard...I don't know whether to feel happy or anxious...>.< Thanks for the review, again!! ~Arya

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