Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 08/15/08 6:21
Chapter: In Love's Clingy Clutches

That was a great fic! It was something different and refreshing. I think you characterized Ron well, showing how he felt about his relationship with Lavender and his true feelings for Hermione.

Ron sat there, under that tree by the Lake, holding Lavender, the girl he didn’t care about in the slightest, while thinking about Hermione, the girl he loved.

I loved that line. It really showed Ron's predicament. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you Helen! I thought it would be an interesting approach to take, and there you go! :) Thanks again!

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