I thought this was really good! I hope you continue...
Wow! That was a quick validation. I'm glad you've managed to get this accepted and as you know I love this!
Hope to hear from you soon and keep it up for the rest.
Author's Response: Yeah, i'm out of chappies now so i hope i can get to writing and then to you. thanks!
I love your Marauders characterisation- it's very original! Remus isn't the little nerd he's always portrayed as here.
It looks like it's going to be a sweet story.
I know! Thankis I like them to. Hope to have numero dos up soon!