Reviews For Minuo Incruentatis
Reviewer: roni2012
Date: 01/03/12 4:23
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Newfound Respect

loe the plot! so happy that neville & servus were the main character!!

Reviewer: kittencat
Date: 12/24/10 19:28
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Newfound Respect

Amazing! I think you captured Longbottom extremely well, especially the kind of subdued bravery and wit that are trademarks of his personality as well as the ability to be surprisingly sarcastic and biting on occasion.

Reviewer: Auntie B
Date: 09/23/08 6:09
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

Excellent storyline. Really enjoyed your style & content.
Thank you

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 08/17/08 10:38
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Newfound Respect

I have to say that this was a very well written story and that it was very imaginative and connected things in great ways. Congratulations on winning the gauntlet and it was well deserved!

Reviewer: leahsm2
Date: 07/26/08 23:51
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

Great Story! It doesn't feel like a Gauntlet at all and the two of you meshed so well that it sounded like one author.

Reviewer: coolh5000
Date: 07/18/08 12:38
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Newfound Respect

wow, it's over! I think this is very impressive as a whole. I like the details about portrait painting, something I've never really thought about before. The characterisation of both your main characters is really good though I'm not sure how I feel about your Harry/Ginny - I suppose it could happen but I don't picture it.

Good luck in the competition. I hope you do well!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/16/08 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Newfound Respect

This can't be the end. Good story. I still can't believe the Harry-Ginny situation. Growing up a Weasley, loyalty would have been ingrained

Author's Response: They aren't Hufflepuffs. And yes, loyalty is ingrained, but that's why the family didn't desert or disown Ginny when it was revealed she couldn't stay faithful to someone for more than a year. They're loyal to each other And as much as I despise Ron, I can admit that Ginny doesn't have the kind of respect for Harry that he does.

Be happy that I didn't kill either of them. Originally, I planned on making a reference in passing to Ron succumbing to the disease.

And yes, this is the end.

Reviewer: coolh5000
Date: 07/16/08 13:11
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

After all the talk of the Gauntlet in the CR I felt I should come and I have to say wow! This is really good - you two have nothing to worry about. It reads like a proper fic (by which I mean it doesn't feel like things are being dicatated by prompts but that it all just flows as one.)

I think both characters are really well and I'm intrigued by what is going to happen next - how many chapters have you got?

I loved the little comment about a biography of Harry - so funny!

Anyway, looking forward to reading more. Think I should go and R&R some other Slyth Gauntlets in order to be fair.

Hannah

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/15/08 13:02
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Par Rapport Inconnues

So the plot thickens. This is really good

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 07/15/08 10:39
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Par Rapport Inconnues

This is shaping up n a very interesting way. I should have said at the end of the last chapter that I like the way Neville is outwardly the young Neville, but obviously interiorly the Neville who ran the DA seventh year. I like how it shows that what Neville shows on the outside is not the whole story. Perhaps he has that in common with Snape.

Author's Response: This, besides my other fic There's Nothing Left To Lose, was my first real attempt at an older Neville, while simultaneously trying to stay correct to canon. I did try to make Neville a bit more (how should I say?) assertive, while also keeping his school-self somewhat intact.

Author's Response: This, besides my other fic There's Nothing Left To Lose, was my first real attempt at an older Neville, while simultaneously trying to stay correct to canon. I did try to make Neville a bit more (how should I say?) assertive, while also keeping his school-self somewhat intact.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/14/08 22:05
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Very Close Calls

This is getting creepy.

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 07/14/08 11:45
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Very Close Calls

this just keeps getting better and better. :)

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 07/13/08 22:52
Chapter: Chapter 2 - A Reluctant Partner

Thank you so much for the update, and please continue the story. I like being able to see some plot from Severus's point of view, and I hope that he and Neville can find the cure.

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 07/13/08 18:48
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

i like the story but please dont kill off molly!!!

Author's Response: *facepalm*

Reviewer: cocain
Date: 07/13/08 17:51
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Twenty-Four Years Later

the ginny affair thing is weird but otherwise very interesting.

Author's Response: Why would it be weird? I think it's very much in Ginny's character to succumb to temptations of the flesh and feel no remorse for which afterwards. She's just cocky and stubbourn enough to let her marriage crumble before she would ever apologise.

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 07/12/08 18:32
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

Wow.

Author's Response: That'll be easy to pass along to CM. ;)

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 07/12/08 14:11
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

It is a very intriguing beginning. It is definitely different to begin with a sentiment of negativity regarding the fall of Voldemort. Though I would disagree with Ginny's affairs described in the fanfiction, I love the focus on Neville. Thank you taking the time to write this, and I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/11/08 17:06
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

Hmm. It's an interesting start to the story.

Reviewer: Lily the Second
Date: 07/11/08 15:15
Chapter: Prologue - The Bad Death of Severus Snape

wow. keep with it. You've really done a good job with word choice and such. it's well put together, even if most of it is given to you. job well done, can't wait for the rest.

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