good, cant believe ron's drunk though. I'm gonna luagh when vicktor finds out about ron on the couch. Lol
Wow, I loved it!
"Ron, shut your mouth before I go all third-year Malfoy on you." ROFL! That was a great line. I really liked this story. Congratulations on a fic well done! XD
i think it is a good idea and i loved how you avoided saying hermiones husbands name for effect!!!! i just assumed it was Ron ... it worked really well!!!! i really hope there is more!!!!! thanks
You told me about this the other day and I am just reviewing it now. Sorry.
I have to say that I was a bit shocked in the beginning. I was trying to figure out who Hermione was married to and I kept reaching the conclussion of Ron. >.< Then I kept thinking that the person she saw outside would be Harry. Though I have to say that it was very good. I would have never in a million years thought of something like this.
I just wish you wrote more. I really want to see how Victor would react to seeing Ron after he insulted Hermione. It would be interesting to read.
I also just want to say that I think you have Hermione spot on the nose!
~Alyssa
Author's Response: THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS GOING FOR! I didn't want anyone to know who her husband was at the beginning, so I chose my words very carefully. I wanted to use the element of surprise. :] I have always identified with Hermione a lot, as well, so I find her quite easy to write.
Nice new fic you've got there, Hannah! :D It's very interesting; not an AU theory I've ever really considered. I loved it! :)
Love,
Caitlin
Author's Response: Now everyone can see my joy of writing AU. It seems everything I write turns out that way too. :]
Wow. Nice story. I really liked the 'don't make me go all third year Malfoy on you' part! That was really funny. I never expected a story like that, but I'm gonna add it to my favorites as soon as I can. Excellent job! {BeccA}
Author's Response: Thank you. :]
I really enjoyed reading this. I loved how you put “... before I go all third-year Malfoy on you.” That was great!
Author's Response: Thanks. :] I debated a long time and how to express that line in a Hermione-ish way.
