Reviewer: Jolia Potter907
Date: 02/03/09 19:14
Chapter: An Unbreakable Silence

good, cant believe ron's drunk though. I'm gonna luagh when vicktor finds out about ron on the couch. Lol

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 08/07/08 18:52
Chapter: An Unbreakable Silence

Wow, I loved it!

"Ron, shut your mouth before I go all third-year Malfoy on you." ROFL! That was a great line. I really liked this story. Congratulations on a fic well done! XD

Reviewer: Pheonix Tears 1994
Date: 07/27/08 11:53
Chapter: An Unbreakable Silence

i think it is a good idea and i loved how you avoided saying hermiones husbands name for effect!!!! i just assumed it was Ron ... it worked really well!!!! i really hope there is more!!!!! thanks

Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 07/20/08 15:28
Chapter: An Unbreakable Silence

You told me about this the other day and I am just reviewing it now. Sorry.

I have to say that I was a bit shocked in the beginning. I was trying to figure out who Hermione was married to and I kept reaching the conclussion of Ron. >.< Then I kept thinking that the person she saw outside would be Harry. Though I have to say that it was very good. I would have never in a million years thought of something like this.

I just wish you wrote more. I really want to see how Victor would react to seeing Ron after he insulted Hermione. It would be interesting to read.

I also just want to say that I think you have Hermione spot on the nose!

~Alyssa

Author's Response: THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS GOING FOR! I didn't want anyone to know who her husband was at the beginning, so I chose my words very carefully. I wanted to use the element of surprise. :] I have always identified with Hermione a lot, as well, so I find her quite easy to write.

Reviewer: HermionesTwin_FromOz
Date: 07/11/08 23:29
Chapter: An Unbreakable Silence

Nice new fic you've got there, Hannah! :D It's very interesting; not an AU theory I've ever really considered. I loved it! :)

Love,
Caitlin

Author's Response: Now everyone can see my joy of writing AU. It seems everything I write turns out that way too. :]

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 07/10/08 17:37
Chapter: An Unbreakable Silence

Wow. Nice story. I really liked the 'don't make me go all third year Malfoy on you' part! That was really funny. I never expected a story like that, but I'm gonna add it to my favorites as soon as I can. Excellent job! {BeccA}

Author's Response: Thank you. :]

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 07/10/08 14:54
Chapter: An Unbreakable Silence

I really enjoyed reading this. I loved how you put “... before I go all third-year Malfoy on you.” That was great!

Author's Response: Thanks. :] I debated a long time and how to express that line in a Hermione-ish way.

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