Great! I love the end!
ZOMG I loved this too! You really seem to understand their emotions and you capture it so well. You're really AMAZING!
Author's Response: Thank you; I spent a lot of time thinking about how they really felt about each other before I could write these stories. Thank you so much for your review!
are u free for lunch on friday?
HA that was priceless
Author's Response: so glad you liked it! thanks for reviewing!
once again, amazing. it was great writing, and i love the ideas that you had for it! are you going to a fanfiction of their date? i know that you probably won't, and if i was you, i wouldn't either, it just doesn't really seem like your style, but if you were already going to, then don't let this stop you. Anyways, another great story, please continue!!!!
Author's Response: heh--you got me. No, no sequel; I think that's best left to the imagination. I will of course keep writing, but this story thread has run its course. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews!
I think that you have been very true to Lily's character. Her experience with Severus would leave her very cautious about letting anyone else in, and I think that you have shown that here.
I like that she doesn't know how she feels about James. All she knows is that she doesn't want to lose him, but she doesn't know if that is love.
I think you need another sequel for the lunch (I loved that line by the way), and to show them finally getting together.
Author's Response: No sequel...but I'm glad you liked this enough to want one :) I think the Snape incident affected her more than she realizes--so I'm glad you picked up of that. Thanks for reviewing!
I really enjoyed reading this letter. It was so touching! It certainly seems like something that lily would write.
Author's Response: I'm glad you felt it was true to her character...thanks for reviewing!