Reviews For One-Way Street
Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 07/27/08 20:57
Chapter: One-Way Street

Great! I love the end!

Reviewer: voldy_mort
Date: 07/26/08 21:05
Chapter: One-Way Street

ZOMG I loved this too! You really seem to understand their emotions and you capture it so well. You're really AMAZING!

Author's Response: Thank you; I spent a lot of time thinking about how they really felt about each other before I could write these stories. Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: xoxoZMHxo
Date: 07/24/08 19:56
Chapter: One-Way Street

are u free for lunch on friday?
HA that was priceless

Author's Response: so glad you liked it! thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HPLuver7
Date: 07/23/08 21:07
Chapter: One-Way Street

once again, amazing. it was great writing, and i love the ideas that you had for it! are you going to a fanfiction of their date? i know that you probably won't, and if i was you, i wouldn't either, it just doesn't really seem like your style, but if you were already going to, then don't let this stop you. Anyways, another great story, please continue!!!!

Author's Response: heh--you got me. No, no sequel; I think that's best left to the imagination. I will of course keep writing, but this story thread has run its course. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews!

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 07/22/08 3:11
Chapter: One-Way Street

I think that you have been very true to Lily's character. Her experience with Severus would leave her very cautious about letting anyone else in, and I think that you have shown that here.

I like that she doesn't know how she feels about James. All she knows is that she doesn't want to lose him, but she doesn't know if that is love.

I think you need another sequel for the lunch (I loved that line by the way), and to show them finally getting together.

Author's Response: No sequel...but I'm glad you liked this enough to want one :) I think the Snape incident affected her more than she realizes--so I'm glad you picked up of that. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 07/21/08 14:14
Chapter: One-Way Street

I really enjoyed reading this letter. It was so touching! It certainly seems like something that lily would write.

Author's Response: I'm glad you felt it was true to her character...thanks for reviewing!

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