Very compelling - not your average fic!
Author's Response: Yay!rn
Although you say your story lacks steam, this introduction has intrigued me. I am eager to see where this all leads!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad it caught your attention. I really had doubts over this one. ;)
This was really quite good. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am confused about how Snape is going to help her with the cure, since he is in fact dead, but it should be interesting. I'll be keeping up with this story for sure.
Author's Response: All will be revealed in time!
Great beginning-- you've made her an interesting and unusual character obviously with her own life and friends (Hugo, and what seems to have been a possible interest in Scorpius, given the comment about how she had never been kissed), but also with a crush on someone brilliant and dead instead of, say, a pop star. :) And the setting and threat of the mysterious disease is a great way to drive the plot.
Author's Response: I'm overjoyed that you find the plot and Rose interesting - I can never convince myself on either fact. Keep reading! (And reviewing, of course - reviews make the world go round!)
Wow this was really good!I am definetly keeping an eye on this, it has great potential. I can tell this has a great chance of winning the challenge. And the title.......hmmm mysterious, can't wait to find out more. I wonder when Rose will meet Severus.....soon, I hope!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. I'm glad people actually like this. Keep reading!
Like the feeling in this story, and an interesting plot is never wrong!
Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: More is on the way!
I liked it, alot! Seriously, I loved it, it is so sad to read such horror that is taking innocent lives. Rose seems very sad, at losing her brother and other friends.
I wonder if Harry and the others are still around. I mean, Ginny, and Harry's kids.
Funny, she should fall on a book, that may have belonged to Snape...
I'm curious to see how she falls in love with him, and the reason for it.
Anyway, great story and best of luck to you as you continue in the challenge!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! :) Harry and the others will definitely make an appearence, don't you worry.
