meepsh... whoa... i think i just got hit in the head with a two-by-four, but i'm not quite sure, whoa... (translation: excellent story)
great story above all!! and keep up the great work!! and i really like ur story and i could somewhat relate to it!!
great he ruined the moment!! but that was a good moment until he open his large mouth
o my gosh i soo can relate to that!!! i mean yea!!=D
that...was awesomly beautiful
**i can't believe i just said that**
that was really good
Wow! I'm speechless!
It was excellent! The imagery, the emotions . . . Wow!! Herimione and Draco's feelings seem so deep and strong. You're very talented!
ah....:X it was really sweet :)
ok all i can say is....WOW! I love that story, its awesome! you really should write a sequel! 10/10!
me like. me like a lot!
me like. me like a lot!
Man that was amazing! I have to say that what I liked most about that story was the fact that they didn't... well, you know. lol. They kept themselves at bay and handeled their emotions in a mature manor. I'm still waiting for my first kiss and I hope it's as sweet as that one. lol. You're a great writer! Can you possibly write a sequal? Please? I have an idea for how you could write one...
Ok, so they can go on in life and stuff and then, Draco could, like somehow change so his hair turns a different color so he's sortof mostly unrecognisable and stuff. And because of something I don't know of yet, he can, like, change his name! Yeah! And then, he runs into Hermione somewhere and he recognises her but, she doesn't recognise him, and his name, so he goes along letting her fall in love with him... again? ... and he finally tells her his true identity and after he does, his apperence is altered back to normal... or something. Then she obviously gets mad at her and then they forgive eachother and live happily ever after... or something like that.
Anyway! If you want to use the idea, I would be MORE then estatic with joy! You have a real talent and you should use it! I hope you do and I can't wait to read more of your work. Loved the simple progression and I loved you progression of events. 10/10! You'll be seeing me around!
Author's Response: thats actually a really good idea, but I would feel bad taking that wonderful Idea and claiming it for my own. why don't you write it? I'll let you use my story line as a prequel because I'd love to hear your take on my fanfic. If you still would rather have ,e write it you'll have to wait some time. email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
awww..is it relly done..i wanted teh read more..buh neways ilove yer story soo coool nd romantic..hope yu write more!!!!!
Author's Response: well I am considering a second story but I'm not sure how it will be accepted. Oh and I have written more, on other fanfic bords but I'm too lazy to upload them here, but I love you guys. I was so well recived here compared to other places.
::jaw drops:: That was really good! Sad and hopeful at the same time! I loved it.
Author's Response: oh wow, thanks I feel so loved here!!
um who says "Damn I must be really f*cking drunk" right after they kiss someone? other that that gr8 job! 10!
Author's Response: ummm...well lets think, blonde, sexy, arrogant...ummm malfoy? DING DING DING!
so cute! loved the rose thingy, it was all profound and junk! loved it alot! 10/10
Author's Response: well, I know the whole things a little occ but...
i really like it so far! ur style of writing is very interesting. i like how u put together ur sonnet. its very well written, almost delicate in a way. ~*10*~
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! I'm glad eveyone likes my sonnet so much!
Love the story! Can't wait to see what happens next. Also, always gotta love details! Which you do fantastically!
Author's Response: thank you very much!
I LOVE your story. It's very descriptive and well written. You do a good job of giving us a clear picture of every scene. Can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: it's done!