Reviews For That Night
Reviewer: Sola Almon
Date: 11/05/06 20:58
Chapter: Written in the Stars

meepsh... whoa... i think i just got hit in the head with a two-by-four, but i'm not quite sure, whoa... (translation: excellent story)

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/02/06 16:41
Chapter: Written in the Stars

great story above all!! and keep up the great work!! and i really like ur story and i could somewhat relate to it!!

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/02/06 16:32
Chapter: Lingering Moments

great he ruined the moment!! but that was a good moment until he open his large mouth

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 11/02/06 16:26
Chapter: In The Dead of Night

o my gosh i soo can relate to that!!! i mean yea!!=D

Reviewer: kks
Date: 08/07/06 1:41
Chapter: Written in the Stars

that...was awesomly beautiful
**i can't believe i just said that**

Reviewer: malfoys_gurl_1234
Date: 05/16/06 19:05
Chapter: Written in the Stars

that was really good

Reviewer: Demons_quill
Date: 04/27/06 19:24
Chapter: Written in the Stars

Wow! I'm speechless!
It was excellent! The imagery, the emotions . . . Wow!! Herimione and Draco's feelings seem so deep and strong. You're very talented!

Reviewer: sandra_13
Date: 04/17/06 12:17
Chapter: Written in the Stars

ah....:X it was really sweet :)

Reviewer: magic_mayhem2
Date: 04/03/06 6:58
Chapter: Written in the Stars

ok all i can say is....WOW! I love that story, its awesome! you really should write a sequel! 10/10!

Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 12/01/05 15:30
Chapter: Written in the Stars


Reviewer: irishphoenix
Date: 07/07/05 21:27
Chapter: Wandering Minds

me like. me like a lot!

Reviewer: irishphoenix
Date: 07/07/05 21:27
Chapter: Wandering Minds

me like. me like a lot!

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 06/29/05 19:02
Chapter: Written in the Stars

Man that was amazing! I have to say that what I liked most about that story was the fact that they didn't... well, you know. lol. They kept themselves at bay and handeled their emotions in a mature manor. I'm still waiting for my first kiss and I hope it's as sweet as that one. lol. You're a great writer! Can you possibly write a sequal? Please? I have an idea for how you could write one...

Ok, so they can go on in life and stuff and then, Draco could, like somehow change so his hair turns a different color so he's sortof mostly unrecognisable and stuff. And because of something I don't know of yet, he can, like, change his name! Yeah! And then, he runs into Hermione somewhere and he recognises her but, she doesn't recognise him, and his name, so he goes along letting her fall in love with him... again? ... and he finally tells her his true identity and after he does, his apperence is altered back to normal... or something. Then she obviously gets mad at her and then they forgive eachother and live happily ever after... or something like that.

Anyway! If you want to use the idea, I would be MORE then estatic with joy! You have a real talent and you should use it! I hope you do and I can't wait to read more of your work. Loved the simple progression and I loved you progression of events. 10/10! You'll be seeing me around!

Author's Response: thats actually a really good idea, but I would feel bad taking that wonderful Idea and claiming it for my own. why don't you write it? I'll let you use my story line as a prequel because I'd love to hear your take on my fanfic. If you still would rather have ,e write it you'll have to wait some time. email me at

Reviewer: daRkzhad0wcaSt3r
Date: 03/18/05 2:23
Chapter: Written in the Stars it relly done..i wanted teh read more..buh neways ilove yer story soo coool nd romantic..hope yu write more!!!!!

Author's Response: well I am considering a second story but I'm not sure how it will be accepted. Oh and I have written more, on other fanfic bords but I'm too lazy to upload them here, but I love you guys. I was so well recived here compared to other places.

Reviewer: JessiLynn
Date: 03/11/05 22:30
Chapter: Written in the Stars

::jaw drops:: That was really good! Sad and hopeful at the same time! I loved it.

Author's Response: oh wow, thanks I feel so loved here!!

Reviewer: Siriusly_in_luv
Date: 03/06/05 0:24
Chapter: Lingering Moments

um who says "Damn I must be really f*cking drunk" right after they kiss someone? other that that gr8 job! 10!

Author's Response: ummm...well lets think, blonde, sexy, arrogant...ummm malfoy? DING DING DING!

Reviewer: Siriusly_in_luv
Date: 03/06/05 0:16
Chapter: In The Dead of Night

so cute! loved the rose thingy, it was all profound and junk! loved it alot! 10/10

Author's Response: well, I know the whole things a little occ but...

Reviewer: Siriusly_in_luv
Date: 03/06/05 0:10
Chapter: Wandering Minds

i really like it so far! ur style of writing is very interesting. i like how u put together ur sonnet. its very well written, almost delicate in a way. ~*10*~

Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! I'm glad eveyone likes my sonnet so much!

Reviewer: JessiLynn
Date: 03/04/05 23:14
Chapter: Wandering Minds

Love the story! Can't wait to see what happens next. Also, always gotta love details! Which you do fantastically!

Author's Response: thank you very much!

Reviewer: M_H_R
Date: 03/04/05 19:01
Chapter: authors notes

I LOVE your story. It's very descriptive and well written. You do a good job of giving us a clear picture of every scene. Can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: it's done!

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